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Murder or Coincidence

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Was it Murder

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Comment from Nanny 6
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This is a fast paced story that kept me interested from the beginning. Loved Lees prayer of repentence. Now, I can't wait to see how God answered it! Judy

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2009

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    Judy I think you will be surprised. God does have a plan...which we forget while living the way we see fit. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
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This is a very well written story, and I've already told you about the pov problems that you've taken liberties with in part one. The same goes for this, but I'm overlooking that for now. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2009

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    Fictionwriter

    I just tried to fix the ones in the first section..if you have a moment, do you mind checking to see if I am on the right track? Appreciate your help. Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am trying to write this through my tears so I hope it makes since. This is so beautiful and so sad. Why is it that it takes a crisis before people understand what they have? You've done a wonderful job with this.

I can't blame if you're not (I think there's a word left out, if not I'm sorry.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2009

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    Barbara

    Unfortunately, life just has to knock you over the head sometimes before you truly see what you are losing...some times too late. Hope you enjoy the ending....Carol
Comment from TillMcCauley
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Wow what a great story and enjoyable read. I am looking forward to the next part. I think your characters are strong and believable as well as thier actions. Thanks for sharing.=)

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2009

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    Till

    Thanks so much for your kind review. I am glad that you found the characters to be believable. Appreciate your comments. Carol
Comment from adewpearl
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lying on the floor flash through should be flashed
sounds like he is feeling remorseful and loving and caring a bit late in the game - I'm not really feeling a lot for this guy for if Sandi had been alive and well and had said - I want you back, it's clear to me he would now not be caring one tiny bit about Rebecca. He'd be running away with Sandi.


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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2009

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    Brooke

    I don't have much sympathy for him either. It's tragic how both he and Rebecca have allowed their to be twisted and torn apart. Some of them never learn until it's too late. Hope you enjoy the ending...I think it's surprising, maybe even a sign from above. Thanks again Carol