Karma Kite
Letting go95 total reviews
Comment from gene_ink
I get the sense that your kite is a metaphor for stress in your life and letting go, the release of that stress. Good job of meeting the contest criteria, Amada.
Gene
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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I get the sense that your kite is a metaphor for stress in your life and letting go, the release of that stress. Good job of meeting the contest criteria, Amada.
Gene
Comment Written 13-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Right on, how right you are. Stress holds me tight, trying to let go of my won kite as well.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done really very well with this form painting an image of release in the limitations of the nanni good luck regards Fuller
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Yes you have done really very well with this form painting an image of release in the limitations of the nanni good luck regards Fuller
Comment Written 13-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Thank you Fuller for the great and insightful review.
Comment from tony bronk
r "karma metaphor "karma Kite." fit? Or does it mean anything at all? If it does, please explain, I am interested in knowing. I'm not saying that it doesn't, I'm only questioning so that I understand. I just never saw it under that perspective before. Karma is a well dserverved feeling from doing something good in the past, not necessarily a relase such as a kite ride. Tony
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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r "karma metaphor "karma Kite." fit? Or does it mean anything at all? If it does, please explain, I am interested in knowing. I'm not saying that it doesn't, I'm only questioning so that I understand. I just never saw it under that perspective before. Karma is a well dserverved feeling from doing something good in the past, not necessarily a relase such as a kite ride. Tony
Comment Written 13-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Thank you Tony Bronk for the insightful review.
Comment from kingskid
Lovely little poem about kites. They are amazing things.
The whole poem is excellent that is why I am not going to pin point a particular line.
It's good to be able to let any burden go, whether it is a kite of financial worry.
Thanks for sharing
love kingskid
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Lovely little poem about kites. They are amazing things.
The whole poem is excellent that is why I am not going to pin point a particular line.
It's good to be able to let any burden go, whether it is a kite of financial worry.
Thanks for sharing
love kingskid
Comment Written 13-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Thank you Kingskid for a very thoughtful review.
Comment from joelh605
Hello, Amada; to me this works best as a "concrete" poem, since the shape on the page resembles a kite. But the poetry part is the real happiness - the metaphor of letting go, and the kite soaring, to express letting go of your worries, and your heart going up.
Wonderful!
Gil
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Hello, Amada; to me this works best as a "concrete" poem, since the shape on the page resembles a kite. But the poetry part is the real happiness - the metaphor of letting go, and the kite soaring, to express letting go of your worries, and your heart going up.
Wonderful!
Gil
Comment Written 13-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Gil: The joy is real, the concrete was accidental; but who is complaining.
Comment from Laidy
i enjoyed reading this poem and thought it was well counted out. i liked the lines and found this an enjoyable read. great write.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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i enjoyed reading this poem and thought it was well counted out. i liked the lines and found this an enjoyable read. great write.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this work, querida amiga.
Comment from Abba Lin
I truly loved your words. so well spoken, so deep in volumes that it says.I've had to let go many times with many different issues and it is freeing, if that's a word..Ever hear of Let go - Let God.. I love your poem amanda... Great Love Lin
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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I truly loved your words. so well spoken, so deep in volumes that it says.I've had to let go many times with many different issues and it is freeing, if that's a word..Ever hear of Let go - Let God.. I love your poem amanda... Great Love Lin
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you Abba Lin for reading and analyzing this kite work. Let Go and let God. Amen.
Comment from Joan E.
Wonderfully expressive, with your "kite" metaphor as the cares of life--we can feel the weight being lifted. I admired your title and thought the naani was the perfect vehicle for your theme. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Wonderfully expressive, with your "kite" metaphor as the cares of life--we can feel the weight being lifted. I admired your title and thought the naani was the perfect vehicle for your theme. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Thank you Joan E for the great and review and the best wishes.
Comment from Pyrrhonian
So much great advise in such a small space. Very well put, and I hope many people take your advice, especially since it's only by letting go that we can begin to truly live.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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So much great advise in such a small space. Very well put, and I hope many people take your advice, especially since it's only by letting go that we can begin to truly live.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2009
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Thank you for the great review and insightful comments. I see four stars, did you mean four or five?
Comment from Blue Danube
amada:
Loved reading this Naani which I found inspiring.
The lightness returns upon letting go of what is burdening somebody.
Much like the color yellow you've chosen which I appreciate as encouraging the light to come in. And the flying kite both an object and a symbol.
Very nice!
Blue
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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amada:
Loved reading this Naani which I found inspiring.
The lightness returns upon letting go of what is burdening somebody.
Much like the color yellow you've chosen which I appreciate as encouraging the light to come in. And the flying kite both an object and a symbol.
Very nice!
Blue
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you Blue for the very insightful review.
