Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Paradox Tremors
I like the message you bring forth out of your writing--everyone can achieve if they're willing to put forth the effort. wITHOUT EFFORT, NOTHING IS POSSIBILE. tHANKS FOR SHARING.
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I like the message you bring forth out of your writing--everyone can achieve if they're willing to put forth the effort. wITHOUT EFFORT, NOTHING IS POSSIBILE. tHANKS FOR SHARING.
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your welcome thanks for reading
Comment from Shirley McLain
Wonderful poem. It flows well, not forced and is easy to read. You tell your story well. I did not find any spag. I think you did a very good job.
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Wonderful poem. It flows well, not forced and is easy to read. You tell your story well. I did not find any spag. I think you did a very good job.
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thank you Tex
Comment from writealot2
Not bad, for a real old working cowboy. Keep up the good work. You tell it like it is and that's what people need more of. The sugar-coating doesn't help anyone. Good job.
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Not bad, for a real old working cowboy. Keep up the good work. You tell it like it is and that's what people need more of. The sugar-coating doesn't help anyone. Good job.
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thank you writealot
Comment from PUPA
A nice start as first chapter,deepwater. I like the enthusiasm and encouraging words you have used in this poem. Rhymed well, flowed smoothly, which made this an enjoyable read.
Well done.
Love
Pupa
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A nice start as first chapter,deepwater. I like the enthusiasm and encouraging words you have used in this poem. Rhymed well, flowed smoothly, which made this an enjoyable read.
Well done.
Love
Pupa
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thank you pupa
Comment from Raul GF
This in an uplifting poem, the rhythm flows nicely, I think it really defines with the first line why some people stay more than sad kind of bitter, with all the regrets from the past, I guess it takes some courage to take the flight, thanks for the little push into reaching closer to my dream.
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This in an uplifting poem, the rhythm flows nicely, I think it really defines with the first line why some people stay more than sad kind of bitter, with all the regrets from the past, I guess it takes some courage to take the flight, thanks for the little push into reaching closer to my dream.
Comment Written 09-May-2010
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thank you charlatan for reading
Comment from Kingsland
This poem is filled with good positive poetic verve. I enjoyed the way you weaved these positive thoughts in a good poetic verse that we all need to strive for... John
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This poem is filled with good positive poetic verve. I enjoyed the way you weaved these positive thoughts in a good poetic verse that we all need to strive for... John
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thanks john
Comment from Begin Again
Deepwater..
WEll done..A real poke in the side, telling each and everyone of us not to settle for the scraps but to reach for the sky...Very nice inspirational poem.
Carol
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Deepwater..
WEll done..A real poke in the side, telling each and everyone of us not to settle for the scraps but to reach for the sky...Very nice inspirational poem.
Carol
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thank you carol
Comment from spiceydog
I really enjoyed this. It has a lyrical soothing rhythm which compliments the positive encouraging message. I like the image of the phoenix - that we can always rise from the ashes of our prior mistakes or failures - presumably over and over. Also enjoyed the thought that we dont lose friends due to circumstances or distance - but they do stay with us always locked in our heart. Beautiful in the composition and the message
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I really enjoyed this. It has a lyrical soothing rhythm which compliments the positive encouraging message. I like the image of the phoenix - that we can always rise from the ashes of our prior mistakes or failures - presumably over and over. Also enjoyed the thought that we dont lose friends due to circumstances or distance - but they do stay with us always locked in our heart. Beautiful in the composition and the message
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thanks again spiceydog
Comment from jack silver
I thought this was a well worded and perfectly written poem. I enjoyed reading and might take a look at some of your other work later on.
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Jack
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I thought this was a well worded and perfectly written poem. I enjoyed reading and might take a look at some of your other work later on.
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Jack
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thanks jack
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no probs
Comment from M. Karol
No excuses for not succeeding is what you are trying to say. Perhaps you are right, those who have in them put in hard work and determination.
Motivational....nicely rhymed.
Madhvi
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No excuses for not succeeding is what you are trying to say. Perhaps you are right, those who have in them put in hard work and determination.
Motivational....nicely rhymed.
Madhvi
Comment Written 09-May-2010
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thanks M
