Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Keep The Juices Flowing"A book of a mixture of stories
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Comment from jl & bandit
A 6 by far, however I can not give you another just yet...
I know both sides of this story... I am both of these people ...LOL
well written.
JL&B
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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A 6 by far, however I can not give you another just yet...
I know both sides of this story... I am both of these people ...LOL
well written.
JL&B
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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JL & B
ARen't we all my dear fr4iend. Thank you for the virtual six and your kind comments. I am pleased. Smiles, Carol
Comment from mermaids
I think most of us can relate to this story, we can be consumed by something and shut out what is important. You held the reader's interest and one has feelings for these characters.
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I think most of us can relate to this story, we can be consumed by something and shut out what is important. You held the reader's interest and one has feelings for these characters.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Mermaids,
As always, I truly appreciate the time you took to read my story and for your gracious comments. Thank you...Carol
Comment from Belinda
The man's conscience plus the woman's understanding. Yes, I think it is alright to leave work for a while. Who knows, after that he will resume writing very fluently. And yes, this happens all the time. Interesting.
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The man's conscience plus the woman's understanding. Yes, I think it is alright to leave work for a while. Who knows, after that he will resume writing very fluently. And yes, this happens all the time. Interesting.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Belinda,
Yes, all work and no play can make Jack a dull boy and the wife very unhappy...Inspiration springs eternal from the happy soul. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sasha
Wow! This is amazing and so beautifully written. I must be honest and admit I am speechless. I agree, I have no doubt that every writer can relate to this one. Very, very good work. I wish I had a 6 to give you for this one.
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Wow! This is amazing and so beautifully written. I must be honest and admit I am speechless. I agree, I have no doubt that every writer can relate to this one. Very, very good work. I wish I had a 6 to give you for this one.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Sasha,
Yes, I think we can all relate at one time or another..life gets the best of us and our writing..at least I know it does me. Thanks ofr the virtual stars and your kind comments...I am very pleased to accept them. smiles,Carol
Comment from RebelRose
While I love to write, I haven't gotten quite this bad yet. Thank goodness, my writing is a hobby, not my life. Of course, when you make a living at it, that's a whole different ball of wax. Good writing. Interesting piece.
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While I love to write, I haven't gotten quite this bad yet. Thank goodness, my writing is a hobby, not my life. Of course, when you make a living at it, that's a whole different ball of wax. Good writing. Interesting piece.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Patty,
Thanks so much for the kind review. Appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
I get that all the time. Writing is taking over my life. It seems that way to me too sometimes. I wish I had the simple life back, but then I enjoy writing too. Wish it was easier to find the balance. Great job.
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I get that all the time. Writing is taking over my life. It seems that way to me too sometimes. I wish I had the simple life back, but then I enjoy writing too. Wish it was easier to find the balance. Great job.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Joy,
Me too! I fall behind on reviewing and answering reviews because I write and then I fall behind on my writing while I tried to catch up. In between I try to live my life...A madhouse!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from fionageorge
Hi Carol, what a wonderful story, and one many writers need to take to heart. Although this is fiction, and well written fiction at that, I am sure this scene plays out in many writers' lives. So absorbed, so creative, so absent from their loved one.
Excellent dialogue, spag free (as per your usually high standard) and just a great 'happy ending' story.
Thanks for sharing, I love it.
Warmest regards my friend,
Marijke
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Hi Carol, what a wonderful story, and one many writers need to take to heart. Although this is fiction, and well written fiction at that, I am sure this scene plays out in many writers' lives. So absorbed, so creative, so absent from their loved one.
Excellent dialogue, spag free (as per your usually high standard) and just a great 'happy ending' story.
Thanks for sharing, I love it.
Warmest regards my friend,
Marijke
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Marijke,
Awesome comments that made me smile...thank you...Carol
Comment from JW
A-w-w. The frustrations of being a writer. You did a great job of describing them here. Your story is very realistic and flows quite smoothly.
Thanks for sharing this.
Jobathon
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A-w-w. The frustrations of being a writer. You did a great job of describing them here. Your story is very realistic and flows quite smoothly.
Thanks for sharing this.
Jobathon
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Jonathon,
Glad you enjoyed the story. Thankyou for the kind comments. Smiles,CArol
Comment from misscookie
oh boy, you are right on point like the man in your story once can lost the most perious person in their life whwn ones juices stsrt to flow. this is a good write
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oh boy, you are right on point like the man in your story once can lost the most perious person in their life whwn ones juices stsrt to flow. this is a good write
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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Cookie,
As always, I truly appreciate the time you took to read my story and for your gracious comments. Thank you...Carol
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You are welcome Miss winner. I knew you would win!11
Comment from minopavlic
I believe that within your own personal journey through life's adventure there are many great stories of struggles and achievements. I look forward to reading such stories.
We all have much to share, and myself being anyalitical by nature, your words express a learning experience.
no_obstacle
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I believe that within your own personal journey through life's adventure there are many great stories of struggles and achievements. I look forward to reading such stories.
We all have much to share, and myself being anyalitical by nature, your words express a learning experience.
no_obstacle
Comment Written 15-May-2010
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no obstacle,
As always, I truly appreciate the time you took to read my story and for your gracious comments. Thank you...Carol