Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Battle Cry"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Rick Koestler
waiting for medics, to carry me away
only two hundred soldiers made it up there today.
This is a compelling poem. Sounds to me like you've been in the mix more than once. As a Viet Nam Vet, I honor your service.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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waiting for medics, to carry me away
only two hundred soldiers made it up there today.
This is a compelling poem. Sounds to me like you've been in the mix more than once. As a Viet Nam Vet, I honor your service.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
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thank you Rick for reading this Old British Army myfriend
Comment from laren
This is a heartbreaking story within this poem. It makes me think that we don't learn. In wars there are not winners. The scars left never heal.
It's very well written and honored the author who remember them.
Congratulations!
Laren
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This is a heartbreaking story within this poem. It makes me think that we don't learn. In wars there are not winners. The scars left never heal.
It's very well written and honored the author who remember them.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
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thank you Laren
Comment from dpn78
Beautiful, a lovely way to show the fear and adrenaline our soldiers felt facing the enemy. Also highlighting as you say the horrible way they lost their lives with no dignity or recognition. A free flowing poem that touches the heart brilliant.
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Beautiful, a lovely way to show the fear and adrenaline our soldiers felt facing the enemy. Also highlighting as you say the horrible way they lost their lives with no dignity or recognition. A free flowing poem that touches the heart brilliant.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
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thank you dpn for reading
Comment from Gideon Roth
Hello, Deepwater. I saw that you had another poem posted so I wanted to give it a quick read. This one, like the others, is well done. You should send these to a publisher that caters to the military, Stars and Stripes and others. I enjoyed reading this and it should do well...Gideon
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Hello, Deepwater. I saw that you had another poem posted so I wanted to give it a quick read. This one, like the others, is well done. You should send these to a publisher that caters to the military, Stars and Stripes and others. I enjoyed reading this and it should do well...Gideon
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
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thank you Gideon would not know how to do that my friend i just write on here for fun Gary
Comment from Ann Smith
Thank you for reminding us of the atrocities of war. Hopefully we can learn from history not to make the same mistakes, but unfortunately we seem to repeat ourselves. I can hear the voices of the soldiers, because I hear my dad. He had some of the same experiences, except in WWII. ann
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Thank you for reminding us of the atrocities of war. Hopefully we can learn from history not to make the same mistakes, but unfortunately we seem to repeat ourselves. I can hear the voices of the soldiers, because I hear my dad. He had some of the same experiences, except in WWII. ann
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Ann for reading
Comment from hfriscia
I enjoyed reading this poem...I like the title you came up in this piece...Every word helps with theme you are going for...
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I enjoyed reading this poem...I like the title you came up in this piece...Every word helps with theme you are going for...
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thanks again hfriscia
Comment from skye
Forgotten by the general public, but heroes to our nation and to their families. Never forgotten for their sacrifices and bravery.
Excellent poem, describing the horrors of war.
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Forgotten by the general public, but heroes to our nation and to their families. Never forgotten for their sacrifices and bravery.
Excellent poem, describing the horrors of war.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thanks again Skye
Comment from Pili Pubul
Excellent poem about the tragedy of war, how many forgotten soldiers are all over throughout the history of humanity sad and well written poem.
Six thousand soldiers, we march through the night
cold winds and rain, keeping the next man in sight
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Excellent poem about the tragedy of war, how many forgotten soldiers are all over throughout the history of humanity sad and well written poem.
Six thousand soldiers, we march through the night
cold winds and rain, keeping the next man in sight
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thank you pili
Comment from Aletheia
A haunting piece of historical poetry you have written here. You created a vivid image of the soldier injured in battle. Very well done! B
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A haunting piece of historical poetry you have written here. You created a vivid image of the soldier injured in battle. Very well done! B
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thank you B for reading
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Deepwater, Your poem is beautifully written in remembrance of those brave soldiers who were slaughtered. Your words brought the poem to life in the horror of war with phrases like "will this be my grave". Very powerful writing brings out the sadness and cruelty of war. Excellent writing. Regards, Warren
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Deepwater, Your poem is beautifully written in remembrance of those brave soldiers who were slaughtered. Your words brought the poem to life in the horror of war with phrases like "will this be my grave". Very powerful writing brings out the sadness and cruelty of war. Excellent writing. Regards, Warren
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading Warren
