Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "As I wander through time and space"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from NightWriter
"As I wander from time and space" is a very sweet and moving poem. Written with warmth and love. Reads smooth from beginning to end and is most captivating. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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"As I wander from time and space" is a very sweet and moving poem. Written with warmth and love. Reads smooth from beginning to end and is most captivating. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you night writer
Comment from Nicki_Mist
This touched my heart and made me cry. It is so deep with emotion that I love it even though it makes me sad. I think you write with lovely imagery and rhythm too. Keep up writing like you do. Hugs to you,
Nicole
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This touched my heart and made me cry. It is so deep with emotion that I love it even though it makes me sad. I think you write with lovely imagery and rhythm too. Keep up writing like you do. Hugs to you,
Nicole
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Nicole for your review
Comment from Katiesherrill
This is very sweet. What a nice tribute to your mom and gramdma. I like how you say,
"Dear Mom and Gram I miss you dear
But see you in my dreams
The stars at night do whisper your names
My heart still carries a tear,"
Great flow, it read with ease.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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This is very sweet. What a nice tribute to your mom and gramdma. I like how you say,
"Dear Mom and Gram I miss you dear
But see you in my dreams
The stars at night do whisper your names
My heart still carries a tear,"
Great flow, it read with ease.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Katie
Comment from rivki1111
Hello, this is a very touching poem for your mum and grandmother. I loved it! It has a great flow and the picture suits it very well.
I have no suggestions for improvment, and thank you for sharing your poetry here at FS. Enjoy the rest of your day/night, cheers, rebekah
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Hello, this is a very touching poem for your mum and grandmother. I loved it! It has a great flow and the picture suits it very well.
I have no suggestions for improvment, and thank you for sharing your poetry here at FS. Enjoy the rest of your day/night, cheers, rebekah
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you rivki
Comment from el twelve
that was a beautiful piece of work. the words and flow were smooth for easy reading and the sentiment was heartwrenching. the love you feel resonates thru your words.
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that was a beautiful piece of work. the words and flow were smooth for easy reading and the sentiment was heartwrenching. the love you feel resonates thru your words.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you el twelve
Comment from Joan E.
My, your forbears were beautiful! You have created a lovely tribute to them with your honest and simple feelings "from the heart" and with your rhymes.
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My, your forbears were beautiful! You have created a lovely tribute to them with your honest and simple feelings "from the heart" and with your rhymes.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you joan for the review
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice tribute to great mothers that toiled tirelessly to shape your life and give it meaning. Your word choices are just good and the rhyming well done. cheers
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This is a nice tribute to great mothers that toiled tirelessly to shape your life and give it meaning. Your word choices are just good and the rhyming well done. cheers
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Perp
Comment from AmorGentil
"Dear Mom and Gram I miss you dear
But see you in my dreams
The stars at night do whisper your names
My heart still carries a tear,"
Those are the things that we really have, the love and affection that we give and we receive, all the rest is pure vanity.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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"Dear Mom and Gram I miss you dear
But see you in my dreams
The stars at night do whisper your names
My heart still carries a tear,"
Those are the things that we really have, the love and affection that we give and we receive, all the rest is pure vanity.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Amor
Comment from prophetess
This is an excellently written and very touching poem that I can relate to as my mother and grandmother have both passed within the last ten years, which is a relativly short time in my eyes. I love the photo you've chosen to frame your work, it is similar to ones i have looked at many times of my own mother and grandmother. I also, think of them frequently and know that one day we will all be together again. I actually have a plot waiting for me alongside my grandmother as I am her namesake and oldest grandchild. Thank you for this touching work.
Prophetess
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This is an excellently written and very touching poem that I can relate to as my mother and grandmother have both passed within the last ten years, which is a relativly short time in my eyes. I love the photo you've chosen to frame your work, it is similar to ones i have looked at many times of my own mother and grandmother. I also, think of them frequently and know that one day we will all be together again. I actually have a plot waiting for me alongside my grandmother as I am her namesake and oldest grandchild. Thank you for this touching work.
Prophetess
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading prophetess
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You're welcome
Comment from the old guy
The instant I saw the picture you used, I remembered my mother and grandmother. My grandmother died when I was nine and my mother, after a long battle with alzheimers, just last year. I have so many memories of gramma's house, and even more of mom's cooking. Thank you for bringing those memories to the fore.
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The instant I saw the picture you used, I remembered my mother and grandmother. My grandmother died when I was nine and my mother, after a long battle with alzheimers, just last year. I have so many memories of gramma's house, and even more of mom's cooking. Thank you for bringing those memories to the fore.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading this and the review
