Bless The Children
an old man learns tolerance?21 total reviews
Comment from MitchellScott
I enjoyed reading this. Your descriptive choices were really good. In particular I liked "Her hair wasn't ugly, just odd". Nice job.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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I enjoyed reading this. Your descriptive choices were really good. In particular I liked "Her hair wasn't ugly, just odd". Nice job.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Hi Mitchell! Thank you! I appreciate this kind review, and that you let me know what you enjoyed with this!! Happy writing to you!! ") Susan
