Freedom is Precious
Quatrain rhyming poem30 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
A proud and respectful tribute to the brave sons and daughters who sacrifice so willingly to keep us free and safe. I loved the strong cadence and good rhymes in this. And the beautiful flag picture sets it off splendidly too. Be proud.
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A proud and respectful tribute to the brave sons and daughters who sacrifice so willingly to keep us free and safe. I loved the strong cadence and good rhymes in this. And the beautiful flag picture sets it off splendidly too. Be proud.
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you.
Comment from chita
You have good imagery and good rhythm and rhyme all through your poem-you are descriptive about how a soldier has seen death and fought and is now ready to return home--I like where you write(Remember that thousands-still serve gallantly) a thought provoking write--great job.
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You have good imagery and good rhythm and rhyme all through your poem-you are descriptive about how a soldier has seen death and fought and is now ready to return home--I like where you write(Remember that thousands-still serve gallantly) a thought provoking write--great job.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you.
Comment from CurtinaMarie
Actually this is exceptional but I've used all of my exceptional ratings. I appreciate this poem because my father once served in the army and he fought in the Korean War. Even though I was only 6-7 years old at the time, we were very glad when he finally came home to stay. He often told us of his war stories. Wonderful Salute to the Military Forces serving to keep our country safe.
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Actually this is exceptional but I've used all of my exceptional ratings. I appreciate this poem because my father once served in the army and he fought in the Korean War. Even though I was only 6-7 years old at the time, we were very glad when he finally came home to stay. He often told us of his war stories. Wonderful Salute to the Military Forces serving to keep our country safe.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you. And a special thank you to your father and to your family for your sacrifice for us.
Comment from DIS-illusioned
--"Never again will I stray. "
What if you're called back to active duty? Will you refuse?
--Nice rhymes and rhythmic flow.
--"We fought, and some perished,
left their blood in that land. "
Gruesome imagery.
--"sent letters to families
describing their deaths."
Not a pleasant task.
--Nice patriotic poem.
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--"Never again will I stray. "
What if you're called back to active duty? Will you refuse?
--Nice rhymes and rhythmic flow.
--"We fought, and some perished,
left their blood in that land. "
Gruesome imagery.
--"sent letters to families
describing their deaths."
Not a pleasant task.
--Nice patriotic poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you. I guess if called back to duty, each must search their lives and their hearts.
Comment from l.raven
Really a great poem.Very well written,and very well said.God Bless all who have fought and died through out the years for are country.And God Bless the one who takes your breath away.Your poem has a wonderful flow to it.And great rhythm and rhyme.And the picturespeaks for itself.Great job
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Really a great poem.Very well written,and very well said.God Bless all who have fought and died through out the years for are country.And God Bless the one who takes your breath away.Your poem has a wonderful flow to it.And great rhythm and rhyme.And the picturespeaks for itself.Great job
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you.
Comment from Kevin C
This is a great poem. So patriotic and so true with every word your write. You have express so easily what many readers feel. It is a wonderful and great tribute to the men and women who serve our country so well.Thank you.
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This is a great poem. So patriotic and so true with every word your write. You have express so easily what many readers feel. It is a wonderful and great tribute to the men and women who serve our country so well.Thank you.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you.
Comment from WilliamDeen
Wonderful tribute and thanks for the service and dedication of the one you wrote this for. Well written, patriotic, emotional, good rhymes. Thanks for sharing.
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Wonderful tribute and thanks for the service and dedication of the one you wrote this for. Well written, patriotic, emotional, good rhymes. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you.
Comment from Chris Tee
Absolutely wonderful writing!!!
As I am not American but served my country in a war as well I say to Bravo!!
This poem just flows and the rhyming is superb!!
I salute you soldier!!
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Absolutely wonderful writing!!!
As I am not American but served my country in a war as well I say to Bravo!!
This poem just flows and the rhyming is superb!!
I salute you soldier!!
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you. I am not a soldier, but a great-grandmother who has a granddaughter serving now, and multitudes of brave relatives who fought for all of us. Even though we are not from the same country, each soldier feels the same about serving their families and friends.
Comment from Galadriel's Lyric
Excellent tribute to those who fight and serve so proudly. Well worded, well written, well rhymed. Great form in your tribute to our military. Great work.
~Kristie
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Excellent tribute to those who fight and serve so proudly. Well worded, well written, well rhymed. Great form in your tribute to our military. Great work.
~Kristie
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you.
Comment from The Stranger
well much as I am totally opposed to the war that was triggered by a blatant lie by Messrs Bush and Blair, I found this a most upliting poem
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well much as I am totally opposed to the war that was triggered by a blatant lie by Messrs Bush and Blair, I found this a most upliting poem
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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I really appreciate your kind and positive review. Thank you. Wars are begun for many reasons. The soldiers do not declare war, but must offer their service and often their lives. Thanks again.
