Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Polele - What a wonderful short, sweet, and to the point 5/7/5 poem for the contest. You use of words is fantastic. Kat

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011

I thank you for the positive vibes Mizkat...Cheers (:))

Comment from TSPoet

Excellent

First your 5-7-5
is spot on

The motion of your words with this
blossom is wonderfull
The imagery is so alive and with a
warm soothing feel of emotion

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011

Thank you for this positive feedback TSPoet...much appreciated.

Comment from rashi kumar

Excellent

A very lovely senryu!
Picturesque!
I love the flow in this little poem,it sounds very nice when read aloud.
All the best!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011

Thank you Kumar...it is a first try for me.

Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

Falling One

I can not exactly tell what happen
but I may say, this mean a beautiful child
who either died or in the aftermath with faded beauty,
getting married and separated her family.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2011

Thanks Escarro, to be honest it is really about the visual effect of a falling flower and I guess it has something to do with 'beauty'.

reply by ernesto escarro on 26-Aug-2011

thanks.