Decent fighting
A Septolet (short)26 total reviews
Comment from acajudy
Ah, but words can hurt just as much as weapons, they just can't kill. I enjoyed reading this short piece. Thank you for sharing. The art work is great.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Ah, but words can hurt just as much as weapons, they just can't kill. I enjoyed reading this short piece. Thank you for sharing. The art work is great.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Love and hugs, Ine
Comment from l.raven
And words could never hit you. That is what my folks said little did they know. I don't aprove of some of the things the kids watch today. My kids had a limit on what they could watch. I love the picture and the poem is true and great.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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And words could never hit you. That is what my folks said little did they know. I don't aprove of some of the things the kids watch today. My kids had a limit on what they could watch. I love the picture and the poem is true and great.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Love and hugs, Ine
Comment from Anisa-
Lol! So did I! It paid of so well ... Hehehe. Great job with this poem. I had fun reading it and thought you packed a lot into very little.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Lol! So did I! It paid of so well ... Hehehe. Great job with this poem. I had fun reading it and thought you packed a lot into very little.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Love and hugs, Ine.Yes it did.
Comment from Dutchie
Ha, this is a good one Ine. I love it. Yes we had to fight with word and even than you had to choose your words very well. I can relate this poem so well.LOL. So few words but I know exactly what you mean. Well done. Fia
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Ha, this is a good one Ine. I love it. Yes we had to fight with word and even than you had to choose your words very well. I can relate this poem so well.LOL. So few words but I know exactly what you mean. Well done. Fia
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Love and hugs, Ine
Comment from mumsyone
This is so true! We weren't allowed to fight physically, like the kids do today; however, words can be just as hurtful as kicking and scratching.
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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This is so true! We weren't allowed to fight physically, like the kids do today; however, words can be just as hurtful as kicking and scratching.
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Love and hugs, Ine
Comment from TammyGail
This was a different style robina, I liked it
your words were well picked and cleverly used
great imagery used alongside your verse
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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This was a different style robina, I liked it
your words were well picked and cleverly used
great imagery used alongside your verse
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Love and hugs, Ine
