Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

I had to read this a few times, but I think I got it all now. Lol.

Good job with this poem, I thought that it flowed well and was interesting.

I am not well versed in the technical side of poetry writing, so I will leave that for the more qualified reviewers.

Thanks for sharing!

Anisa

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012

Hey there Anisa,
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and am pleased that you got plenty out of it.
cheers
Grant

Comment from peggles

Excellent

It was very well written and expressed
Heartfelt and very touching
Lovely imagery used
Thanks for sharing this moving piece
I liked you conveyed a clear message

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012

Hi again Peggles,
thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts, I truly appreciate it!
cheers
Grant