Jerry Jing-Jang Comes to Town
A cowboy tale74 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
Your father must have been a great story teller if I judge him from this poem. I am not so keen on Western in general, but this one is good and makes an excellent contest entry. Best wishes for it.
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Your father must have been a great story teller if I judge him from this poem. I am not so keen on Western in general, but this one is good and makes an excellent contest entry. Best wishes for it.
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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He never wrote anything down. I filled in a lot of details that neither of us remember any more. I'm glad you liked this western. Thanks for this great review and the good wishes for the contest.
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Why not-LOL.
Comment from laren
A history of the West in this poem so well written, has the pace of country music. I really enjoyed reading it!
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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A history of the West in this poem so well written, has the pace of country music. I really enjoyed reading it!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I'm so glad you liked Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for this wonderful review.
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I really enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from TXOxxxooo
Your Dad would I am sure love this one! I did. What a fun story and worthy os more stars than I have to give! Only comment would be to break tale into stanzas for easier reading....Blessings :) T.K. McGowan
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Your Dad would I am sure love this one! I did. What a fun story and worthy os more stars than I have to give! Only comment would be to break tale into stanzas for easier reading....Blessings :) T.K. McGowan
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I'll take the stars you want to give it. I'm considering breaking it down to make it easier for kids to read. Thanks for this wonderful review.
Comment from misscookie
Oh I love this poem very much It put a smile on my face.
I can see shildren laughing and giggling as the listen to this poem. this was a plsant poem to read so early in the morning.
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Oh I love this poem very much It put a smile on my face.
I can see shildren laughing and giggling as the listen to this poem. this was a plsant poem to read so early in the morning.
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I'm glad I made you smile. Thanks for this wonderful review.
Comment from Irene D. Garces
The artwork is so nice it made me remember those cowboy movies in olden times.
The message is adorable, amusing, entertaining and fast-pacing details of Jerry-Jing-Jang stories. My amusement is coupled because of the rhymes present in almost every other line.
Very well done.
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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The artwork is so nice it made me remember those cowboy movies in olden times.
The message is adorable, amusing, entertaining and fast-pacing details of Jerry-Jing-Jang stories. My amusement is coupled because of the rhymes present in almost every other line.
Very well done.
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I'm so glad you liked my story poem. Thanks for this womderful review.
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Thanks too for sharing.
Comment from thmedina
Great story. You pulled off illustrating a pretty good little story within the rhyming scheme. Sounded like a television theme song as I hummed along. Thanks
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Great story. You pulled off illustrating a pretty good little story within the rhyming scheme. Sounded like a television theme song as I hummed along. Thanks
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I'll have to find someone who can set it to music! I was surprised to see how many people thought it had a tune. I have zero talent for music myself. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Isabeldorastorey
Laughing out so loud the neighbours must be wondering! This is wonderful. Knowing the ways of drunken men (usually in search of a lemon tree) I wonder if the first actually made it to the place with a hole in the seat?
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Laughing out so loud the neighbours must be wondering! This is wonderful. Knowing the ways of drunken men (usually in search of a lemon tree) I wonder if the first actually made it to the place with a hole in the seat?
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Haha, I suppose any tree would do. But I wanted the poem to be family friendly. Thanks for this wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from amarherig14
I enjoyed the poem about Jerry Jing Jang, the town hero.The picture used was a good addition to your write.The rhyme and flow are excellent. It was like watching a cowboy movie, very enjoyable
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I enjoyed the poem about Jerry Jing Jang, the town hero.The picture used was a good addition to your write.The rhyme and flow are excellent. It was like watching a cowboy movie, very enjoyable
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I'm glad you enjoyed my Jerry Jing-Jang poem. Thanks for this great review.
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You are welcome,Cindy warren.It was a very good one. Regards,amarherig.
Comment from donaldww
Fun read about the infamous Jerry Jing-Jang, although I've never heard of him personally. The rhyming words are perfect.
I think splitting the poem into a few stanzas would make it easier to read. But that is just an observation and you may take with a grain of salt.
Cheers!
DW
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Fun read about the infamous Jerry Jing-Jang, although I've never heard of him personally. The rhyming words are perfect.
I think splitting the poem into a few stanzas would make it easier to read. But that is just an observation and you may take with a grain of salt.
Cheers!
DW
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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He's my dad. His real name is Gerry but I changed the first letter so kids could sound it out easier. He made up the Jing-Jang part himself. As for his adventures, well...they make good stories.
Comment from Meta~Mark
what a nice old fashioned western poem here..just a joy to read to the very end..But the townfolk all knew who'd saved the day; Jerry Jing-Jang had earned that sheriff's pay!
excellent
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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what a nice old fashioned western poem here..just a joy to read to the very end..But the townfolk all knew who'd saved the day; Jerry Jing-Jang had earned that sheriff's pay!
excellent
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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It was a fun poem to write. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for this wonderful review.
