Unique
A Little Octogrammic Mould Breaker...33 total reviews
Comment from words
Bravo!!!
Your description of having a unique voice, using your own well-honed voice is just marvelous.
See me dancing the "great poem" dance.
Bravo my, friend, bravo!!!
Hugs,d
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Bravo!!!
Your description of having a unique voice, using your own well-honed voice is just marvelous.
See me dancing the "great poem" dance.
Bravo my, friend, bravo!!!
Hugs,d
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Aww thanks d...the "great poem" dance or the "unique loony tune" perhaps...I know you're being kind! LOL
Sirriusly, thanks for the awesome review...and glad you understand my brand!
Cheers Pee
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Comment from Galactia
A different hum within my drone
I somehow seek
Mundane to star and stand alone
as pen will leak
I have to work with cards I'm dealt
Which sometimes isn't smart or svelte
I've done the paddle up shit creek
in voice, unique
LOL I think i reached that when i first joined using words like sumset in poetry and flower of zinc, that no one has used in poetry. Everyone tells me you can't mix maths/science in poetry, I beg to differ and if it's a word, even if it's not found in the common dictuionary, I'm going to use it:)
Great poem reflecting being unique and different and adding your own spin on things, I say cheers to that me girl :))
Great job
LOVED IT
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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A different hum within my drone
I somehow seek
Mundane to star and stand alone
as pen will leak
I have to work with cards I'm dealt
Which sometimes isn't smart or svelte
I've done the paddle up shit creek
in voice, unique
LOL I think i reached that when i first joined using words like sumset in poetry and flower of zinc, that no one has used in poetry. Everyone tells me you can't mix maths/science in poetry, I beg to differ and if it's a word, even if it's not found in the common dictuionary, I'm going to use it:)
Great poem reflecting being unique and different and adding your own spin on things, I say cheers to that me girl :))
Great job
LOVED IT
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thanks darling girl.
LOVED your review and you just keep mixing science, maths and floral into beautiful literary art...unique may NOT always gel with everybody...but they sure remember you later on. Haha
Cheers and thanks again
P
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Comment from cvcopac
A spring-time flood? A hard quicky, where it rains a few minutes and next thing you know the front porch furniture's sailing out past the gate post? You've set your goals, Phillippa, and I thinks that's the right mark to aim for. You'll be able to measure from the mark periodically to see your growth. You'll always know who you are and where you stand. I see a lot of parallels between our goals and I can only wish you all the best. You'll just keep getting better and your style will evolve as you ripen with experience. The octo. is a fun form to write to and I like your use of it--extensive use, and you've taken it another step and made it yours. Nice work. A bold and honest write. Kenny
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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A spring-time flood? A hard quicky, where it rains a few minutes and next thing you know the front porch furniture's sailing out past the gate post? You've set your goals, Phillippa, and I thinks that's the right mark to aim for. You'll be able to measure from the mark periodically to see your growth. You'll always know who you are and where you stand. I see a lot of parallels between our goals and I can only wish you all the best. You'll just keep getting better and your style will evolve as you ripen with experience. The octo. is a fun form to write to and I like your use of it--extensive use, and you've taken it another step and made it yours. Nice work. A bold and honest write. Kenny
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thanks K...your reviews mean a great deal. I know you'd never blow smoke up my dress so very much appreciate your advice and I hope to ripen with every literary experience.
MANY thanks.
Hugs P
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PS I adore the Octo...but I guess you COULD see that...haha
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I'm not much of a thinker, P. I learn from doing--sometimes it's a long hard road. I learned first the meter, form, etc. but really am still trying to write a decent sonnet. You put your all into everything you write.
Comment from steevie
I found your poem unique just like you showed us how to reach that point. I agree that we get comfortable within our little box, but its true that expressing ourselves in different venues will broaden our horizons.
your write was very entertaining and it had me laughing in some spots, only because I know you better than I did, oh lets say, a week ago, which is an eternity in my books. LOL
excellent poem, borderline ranting. :o)
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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I found your poem unique just like you showed us how to reach that point. I agree that we get comfortable within our little box, but its true that expressing ourselves in different venues will broaden our horizons.
your write was very entertaining and it had me laughing in some spots, only because I know you better than I did, oh lets say, a week ago, which is an eternity in my books. LOL
excellent poem, borderline ranting. :o)
smiles
steve
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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LOL Yep, borderline ranting indeed...could well have dangled a foot up to the neck with ranty in this one Stevo.
Many thanks for your delightful analysis of thy mould breaker extrodafrickinaire! LMAO
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P
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LOL Always a treat to receive your replies. Others pale in comparison to the poet tht is you, my friend
stevo
hugs and
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Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
u neek u r
u neek u b
i c u r
u neek u c
o i c u r
u neek 2 a t
the moreso cos
u don't leak like me-weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
sorry, i'm losing it, Phillippa! lol.
another fab gem, Pippa, me dear
i do so wish there were more on here!
warmly, xxx, ephin eph.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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u neek u r
u neek u b
i c u r
u neek u c
o i c u r
u neek 2 a t
the moreso cos
u don't leak like me-weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
sorry, i'm losing it, Phillippa! lol.
another fab gem, Pippa, me dear
i do so wish there were more on here!
warmly, xxx, ephin eph.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Thanks eph...you're such a You neek ephing wordsmith.
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Hugs P
Comment from Creative77
Wow, this is such a great poem! You have such a unique style of writing. Your thoughts are honest and full of feeling. Nice job!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Wow, this is such a great poem! You have such a unique style of writing. Your thoughts are honest and full of feeling. Nice job!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much. I'm as honest as I can be without completely shooting myself in the foot!
Cheers P
Comment from Warren Rodgers
My only regret in rewarding you a sixer is that I won't have one for you for 30 days! And I know you'll write many pieces which will deserve one. This could be your bio or your theme song! It's so much YOU! It's such a bouncy write with great rhythm and always entertaining and funny! I love many parts of this superb mod-octo. I thought the 4th stanza was especially funny with: "And round these parts I'm quite well known for loony streak" which answers my age old question; "I wonder what it would be like to live next door to P" LOL Your poem is packed full of confidence and good advice for all of us. One of the great things about you is that in addition to your uniqueness, you're not just someone who out here posting only one type of poetry or one old theme. You have taken the time to learn and hone your skills with many different type of poetry and that makes you unique too. Thanks for my wakeup laugh!!
All the best!
Rodge
xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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My only regret in rewarding you a sixer is that I won't have one for you for 30 days! And I know you'll write many pieces which will deserve one. This could be your bio or your theme song! It's so much YOU! It's such a bouncy write with great rhythm and always entertaining and funny! I love many parts of this superb mod-octo. I thought the 4th stanza was especially funny with: "And round these parts I'm quite well known for loony streak" which answers my age old question; "I wonder what it would be like to live next door to P" LOL Your poem is packed full of confidence and good advice for all of us. One of the great things about you is that in addition to your uniqueness, you're not just someone who out here posting only one type of poetry or one old theme. You have taken the time to learn and hone your skills with many different type of poetry and that makes you unique too. Thanks for my wakeup laugh!!
All the best!
Rodge
xoxo
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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LOL Well what a delightful regret that is then! LOL Your sixer review was awesome thanks Wazza and I enjoyed your honesty, and yep, you'd be one of the few who know my loony streak well.
I can't stick with one subject, genre or format...novelty wears off REAL quick. LOL...to be honest I don't know how some here can keep churning out the same BS about the same BS subject. It gets real boring, real quick. Still, plenty like to buy their position...haha, more fool them and those deep deep pockets.
You're one of a very unique handful here that I respect highly Rodge. Thanks for your support always and if I can make you laugh when you wake up, then I've done my job. LOL
Cheers CPJ
xxxx
Comment from MgySgtMarine
I happen like unique, as a matter of fact we all share that common but overlooked fact that we all are unique in our one way. The lines flowed freely and kept me focused as to the topic. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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I happen like unique, as a matter of fact we all share that common but overlooked fact that we all are unique in our one way. The lines flowed freely and kept me focused as to the topic. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Indeed, you hit it on the head - we are all unique in some way. We just have to find our best angle and run with that even if it means a few fours now and again.
Thanks for a beaut review.
Cheers P
Comment from misscookie
You had my attention from the first line to the lastI found this top nbe an interesting rean your words are very encouraging and will make people think.
I always told my children they are not different they are justunique. To be themselves in all they do.
Thank you for sharinbg this delightful meaningful poem.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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You had my attention from the first line to the lastI found this top nbe an interesting rean your words are very encouraging and will make people think.
I always told my children they are not different they are justunique. To be themselves in all they do.
Thank you for sharinbg this delightful meaningful poem.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Thankyou misscookie
Yes we all have something unique about us.
Cheers P
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Yes we do.Your very welcome.
Until next time.
Comment from Child of the King
This deserves 6 stars because YOU are unique. I haven't been in here too long. Was here in 2011 but did not return.
I love what you wrote and YOU are unique. I try my hand at different styles of writing a lot as I like the contest challenges. Thanks for sharing---Peace
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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This deserves 6 stars because YOU are unique. I haven't been in here too long. Was here in 2011 but did not return.
I love what you wrote and YOU are unique. I try my hand at different styles of writing a lot as I like the contest challenges. Thanks for sharing---Peace
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much.
Happy Easter
Cheers P
