Am I a Prisoner of My Life?
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Comment from JW
This is a very optimist story/poem. In reading it, it reminds me of a comment someone made to me during my youth - they said, usually - the biggest barrier a person faces in life is the one they place in front of themselves.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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This is a very optimist story/poem. In reading it, it reminds me of a comment someone made to me during my youth - they said, usually - the biggest barrier a person faces in life is the one they place in front of themselves.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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So very true, my friend. Take care~Debbie
Comment from tedanytime
You have written a fine reminder that there are many things to learn regardless of circumstances of life.
Giving way to the mopes distracts from observing some special sight nearby.
Your words are much appreciated!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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You have written a fine reminder that there are many things to learn regardless of circumstances of life.
Giving way to the mopes distracts from observing some special sight nearby.
Your words are much appreciated!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Attitude and our actions are so very important. Thanks, my friend~Debbie
Comment from ronnie k
Never can to much be said especially when one says in such a wonderful word and rhyme pattern, I enjoyed the upbeat rhyme and singsong movement. Thank you
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Never can to much be said especially when one says in such a wonderful word and rhyme pattern, I enjoyed the upbeat rhyme and singsong movement. Thank you
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from CBA
"I have so many ways in which to grow
In doing so I have a wonderful chance
Of enjoying life's mystical dance" are the favourite lines of mine...and it is so true. Inspiring words! I love the art work you chose and the background text colour that complements your poem so nicely. Well done.
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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"I have so many ways in which to grow
In doing so I have a wonderful chance
Of enjoying life's mystical dance" are the favourite lines of mine...and it is so true. Inspiring words! I love the art work you chose and the background text colour that complements your poem so nicely. Well done.
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am glad you found it inspirational~Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
To being a prisoner, I would so no(know)
I have so many ways in which to grow
In doing so I have a wonderful chance
Of enjoying life's mystical dance
Excellent Debbie for you know what you like and partake of it very well. Isn't it nice to be reminded?
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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To being a prisoner, I would so no(know)
I have so many ways in which to grow
In doing so I have a wonderful chance
Of enjoying life's mystical dance
Excellent Debbie for you know what you like and partake of it very well. Isn't it nice to be reminded?
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Thanks for catching that. It was supposed to be 'say no'. I fixed it. Yes, I needed to remind myself today for some reason~Debbie
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Knew something was wrong. LOL
