Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Full of love for all and sharing
With understanding and caring
When you next hear a waterfall
You will make sense of this all

I already have Deb. So much love and caring that you would have to be deaf dumb and blind not to. A wonderful write in beautiful quatrains.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you! Debbie

reply by Gungalo on 21-Aug-2013

Smile girl

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This has a nice flow, the rhymes are well done, and the positive message is pleasant. I imagining myself near your your pretty rainbow. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer

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 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

sighhh... this makes me wanna take a road trip to the nearest waterfall. There is such a calming effect it has on me. I like the way your experience helped you reflect on refreshment and renewal. I've written on the waterfall a time or two as well.

Blessings~
Jewell

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 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie