Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

This is a lovely love poem, it sounds as if you might have found your love. It's wonderful when it works the way God planned, a nightmare when it doesn't. I lived in 32 years of abuse before I could get away with my life. Good poem. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thank you for your great review. I really appreciate it. I am so glad you are out of your bad situation.

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this. The words of description regarding your love are awesome. Especially loved the stanza about the storms, thunder, but gentle breeze, etc. Great job and thanks for sharing with us.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from Matoshka

Excellent

It may be wishful thinking, but who knows, it could happen. I loved how gentle and loving this felt. I wonder we you meet, will you write to us?I really enjoyed this. Blessings and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks so much for your kind review.

reply by Matoshka on 19-Sep-2013

You are so welcome AnnieDawn, it was a pleasure. Blessings

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

This is a beautiful expression of love portrayed in this free verse. I loved your thoughts on your mate with, "Thunder, lightning, a ragging storm,...yet a summer breeze softness,...with gentle fingers". Nicely done. This was a sweet little write, well done, Ridley

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Nicely written and very pretty. The true loves are always so hard to describe, for we want to you the best and most original words of the heart.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

That is pretty.
He resembles the elements. Thunder,lightening, a raging storm, yet softness like a summer breeze that
touches me with gentle fingers.
I think that is very close to a true description of a man as seen through the eyes of a lover. Well said. Nancy

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from Gabrieltheswifter

Excellent

Amazing inspirational free-verse! I never used to like free-verse, but it allows you to paint such vivid pictures, and you have more freedom and maneuverability.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

What a romantic and tender free verse this is, so smoothly flowing and full of rich imagery. I should think this is a very strong entry for this contest. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author gave a detailed description of the scene.
The poem was thought provoking. The artwork was perfect and
complimented the poem. Thank you, harmony13

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thanks you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate it and good luck to you and your entries.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Beautiful..................true love........expressed so well...He is a smile be getting a smile...... Lovely................
He is a song without words creating joy..............
Well done
God bless

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

Thank you so much for your kind and generous review. I do appreciate it.