Steve's Poems for Kids
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Moonshine"A collection of my children's poems
80 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
Really . Tropical trees on the moon?
You must be kidding.
It all made sense until this point .
I loved it .if only to read this it is wotth being on fan story.
When are you publishing your book of nonsense poems?
I put my order in now.Z.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Really . Tropical trees on the moon?
You must be kidding.
It all made sense until this point .
I loved it .if only to read this it is wotth being on fan story.
When are you publishing your book of nonsense poems?
I put my order in now.Z.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Yeah, the council flat didn't send a little warning signal?
Book, huh? That might be the biggest nonsense of all.
Steve
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Steve you under estimate the power of nonsense
And the multitudes out there looking to escape.Z.
Comment from Tessa Kay
Congratulations for winning!
Your poem fulfilled the brief perfectly. It was funny nonsense at its best. Like the fact that you placed it on the moon and the whatchamacallit is just cute.
It flows really nice and makes you smile, giving you a little lift. Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Congratulations for winning!
Your poem fulfilled the brief perfectly. It was funny nonsense at its best. Like the fact that you placed it on the moon and the whatchamacallit is just cute.
It flows really nice and makes you smile, giving you a little lift. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, TK - so glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from Adri7enne
Your poem is filled with nonsense, "With a moon-dog, an alien, Grumpy's old mother, a whatchamacallit, a something or other." LOL! Cute! Children are attracted by those kinds of images, as evidenced by Dr. Seusse's popularity. I enjoyed all the other funny ideas. Good luck in the contest, steveh. - Ah, I just spotted the winner's ribbon. Congratulations! Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Your poem is filled with nonsense, "With a moon-dog, an alien, Grumpy's old mother, a whatchamacallit, a something or other." LOL! Cute! Children are attracted by those kinds of images, as evidenced by Dr. Seusse's popularity. I enjoyed all the other funny ideas. Good luck in the contest, steveh. - Ah, I just spotted the winner's ribbon. Congratulations! Well done.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you!
I get to try this out on my 5-year old granddaughter this week....
Steve
Comment from Perp Ihebom
Writing this nice piece of fun poetry must have taken a lot from you. Only a very talented person can get this done. I enjoyed the story. The rhymes are cute. kudos
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Writing this nice piece of fun poetry must have taken a lot from you. Only a very talented person can get this done. I enjoyed the story. The rhymes are cute. kudos
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Perp, thanks for the kind words and the six stars.
Steve
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This is a fun read. The words are descriptive and paint
vivid and amusing images. The reader-friendly language
makes it easy to comprehend. The attached illustration
is a nice accent. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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This is a fun read. The words are descriptive and paint
vivid and amusing images. The reader-friendly language
makes it easy to comprehend. The attached illustration
is a nice accent. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the kind words.
Steve
Comment from The Death
This one is so funny and interesting.You thought it out very well in a very non sensible way..hehe...and it is fab.It rhymes well with use of solid rhyming couplets.you did an excellent work:)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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This one is so funny and interesting.You thought it out very well in a very non sensible way..hehe...and it is fab.It rhymes well with use of solid rhyming couplets.you did an excellent work:)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Anu
Steve
Comment from J. Dark
This has simply got to be a winner. It is delightfully full of sparkling imagery, superb rhyme and rhythm. It is the colourful imagination that has made this work memorable and a perfect competition entry for the brief. Very impressive.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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This has simply got to be a winner. It is delightfully full of sparkling imagery, superb rhyme and rhythm. It is the colourful imagination that has made this work memorable and a perfect competition entry for the brief. Very impressive.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Julie
A winner indeed, although by the slimmest of margins over rosehill's wonderful tale.
Steve
Comment from fairydancer
Oh how magical! I love nonsense poems, especially those with such great cadence and rhymes. You had me laughing all the way through as I read aloud.
...and my tongue only got tied once! LOL
Great! Good luck - Cally :)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Oh how magical! I love nonsense poems, especially those with such great cadence and rhymes. You had me laughing all the way through as I read aloud.
...and my tongue only got tied once! LOL
Great! Good luck - Cally :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Cally
Hope you untied your tongue in time for dinner!
Steve
Comment from SteveY
Wow, this one sure speaks with a creative imagination! What a wonderful story told in this very entertaining poem. One every child would love to have read to them.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Wow, this one sure speaks with a creative imagination! What a wonderful story told in this very entertaining poem. One every child would love to have read to them.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Steve.
Yep, I'm gonna try this out on my granddaughter tomorrow.
Steve
Comment from Ben Colder
If this one don't win, then the whole thing is rigged. Talking about nonsense, you win hands down in my book. I shall look for it in the booth.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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If this one don't win, then the whole thing is rigged. Talking about nonsense, you win hands down in my book. I shall look for it in the booth.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Ben
Yes, it won!
Steve
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Excellent.