Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

Dear robina: I really loved this one though ashamed to have no deserved six stars rating! I enjoyed the presentation of color and the rhythm of the repetition of perseverance as your strength and intention. Great work! Much appreciated I all respect, Vance

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

perseverance is always the key my friend even naked in the hurricaine great poem my friend well written thank you xxgazzagodbodxx

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

I love this possitive and powerful poem Ine.
The repeating lines express the strength of your thoughts an together you two are so strong!!! Nice flow and well chosen words make it such a pleasure to read. Fia

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem with a very good message. It is a strong poem with the repeating phrases of We will persevere.
~teresa~

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Dirus

Excellent

HI there,

Thank you for the nice read. I liked the las two lines the most. They had a strong meaning to them. Alos good picture as well. Keep up the good work. :)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a good poem my friend I like the way the poem flows and I like the picture and the way the two gel when put together thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

reply by c_lucas on 24-Feb-2014

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. It something I believe in and fought for, especially for my loved ones. We last and we last. Sometimes we do not want to. But we last. Great work.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

I enjoy your poem message , is powerful and not always easy
bur perseverance usually is the path to get our wishes, and love is worth it.
Love the repetition and style. Pili

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

reply by Pili Pubul on 24-Feb-2014

You are most welcome my original poet. Enjoy the day. Pili

Comment from Marillion

Excellent

Nicely said, my friend, with a great message of love and perseverance. There need to be more messages like this, I think. Well done, Ine.

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine