Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

This is both cool and obvious ! I love the obvious genre. Picking something so obvious yet so hidden to us fascinates me. I like to write like this too. Good work !

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you~Debbie :)

Comment from J. P. Egry

Excellent

Lots of fun in this senryu. The pun is perfect, but somehow I think this pig is somewhat masochistic. Some people are like that---think that money is to die for. They go for the gold and end up in the soup. (i>)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you~Debbie :)Thank you~Debbie :)

reply by J. P. Egry on 27-Feb-2014

You're welcome.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

LOl, pig will have trouble spending his cash with out his ham or his hock. A humorous play of words for a senryu. The picture makes it perfect.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you~Debbie :)

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

pig needing cash
visits local pawnshop
to hock his ham

Hello Poor old pig, but hey makes a point, is sure does.
What gold we hocj to feed our bronze dreams eh.

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you~Debbie :)