The Trining
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "THE MAGIC OF KLASCO'S VISION"A man must discover his identity and destiny.
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Comment from kiwijenny
I love the interaction between crossan ....the name is the rein.....the interaction and that Klasco seems a natural ......it is splendid rhet your fantasy is grounded in realism ...it adds to the story
Well done
God bless
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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I love the interaction between crossan ....the name is the rein.....the interaction and that Klasco seems a natural ......it is splendid rhet your fantasy is grounded in realism ...it adds to the story
Well done
God bless
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you for such a nice review and your kindness, Jenny (I'll keep calling you that until you tell me differently, LOL). I appreciate your loyalty.
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Yep I am Jenny
Comment from c_lucas
It is time for the action to begin. This shows promise of a real nail biter until it is over. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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It is time for the action to begin. This shows promise of a real nail biter until it is over. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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You do bring up a point, Charlie. Do you think I have been holding off too long without a major conflict?
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I think you have a good opening for one. You're doing an excellent job with your story line.