Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Do you hold the power of gods "A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Alan K Pease
Jesus is a starship who wanders all over the earth giving blessedness to all who follow his lead. When we war against each other we sacrifice our guardian angels to the greed of war. In peace I hope they return. Excellent poetics and message.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Jesus is a starship who wanders all over the earth giving blessedness to all who follow his lead. When we war against each other we sacrifice our guardian angels to the greed of war. In peace I hope they return. Excellent poetics and message.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thanks Alan
Comment from pearlecat
This is so well said. Asking the questions we should all be asking and hopefully acting on in our own way. We are probably the poster child of the universe on how NOT to behave. Loved this! Pearl
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This is so well said. Asking the questions we should all be asking and hopefully acting on in our own way. We are probably the poster child of the universe on how NOT to behave. Loved this! Pearl
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this and the review pearl
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent poetry. You have talked about many things, questions and answers. I honestly think man is destroying what God made, and one day we will answer for it. I love your poems, you always give us lots to think about. :) Sandra
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Excellent poetry. You have talked about many things, questions and answers. I honestly think man is destroying what God made, and one day we will answer for it. I love your poems, you always give us lots to think about. :) Sandra
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you Sandra
Comment from trevorletang
A profound and very thought provoking piece of writing. I found you have a unique style which works well for the reader. great work looking forward to reading more of it
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A profound and very thought provoking piece of writing. I found you have a unique style which works well for the reader. great work looking forward to reading more of it
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you again for this
Comment from tfawcus
Beautifully balanced lines, each with a caesura in the middle, make this poem flow smoothly. The connection between aliens and guardian angels is clever. Sometimes it does indeed seem that we treat our guardian angels like aliens.
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Beautifully balanced lines, each with a caesura in the middle, make this poem flow smoothly. The connection between aliens and guardian angels is clever. Sometimes it does indeed seem that we treat our guardian angels like aliens.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Sonaleeka
Always enjoy your writing.Kind of inspiration to write more and learn more and more.Worth reading.thanks for sharing.
God bless!
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Always enjoy your writing.Kind of inspiration to write more and learn more and more.Worth reading.thanks for sharing.
God bless!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Artist Dilemma
Another masterpiece from a very talented pen. Few lines which absorbs the meaning of our true? life. A Fascinating poem of which I have enjoyed thoroughly this morning.
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Another masterpiece from a very talented pen. Few lines which absorbs the meaning of our true? life. A Fascinating poem of which I have enjoyed thoroughly this morning.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you Artist
Comment from Pyrrho
Thia is one of those: what does it mean in the infinite scheme with the overtones that only the Christian answer is contemplated. I recommend reading Twain's, "Letter from the Earth" for an alternate, brilliant, comical, but in the end rational and enlightening viewpoint.
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Thia is one of those: what does it mean in the infinite scheme with the overtones that only the Christian answer is contemplated. I recommend reading Twain's, "Letter from the Earth" for an alternate, brilliant, comical, but in the end rational and enlightening viewpoint.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from chasennov
Chapter 50 of the book Writings From the Heart Does man hold his child "Do you hold the power of gods" This is quite a handsome poem you have created here. I enjoyed the read. well done.
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Chapter 50 of the book Writings From the Heart Does man hold his child "Do you hold the power of gods" This is quite a handsome poem you have created here. I enjoyed the read. well done.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
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thank you
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Welcome.
Comment from MM lives on :)
I truly enjoyed reading your grand poem
Deepwater..it was well written and expressed throughout and adorned by striking imagery..thanks for sharing always a pleasure
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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I truly enjoyed reading your grand poem
Deepwater..it was well written and expressed throughout and adorned by striking imagery..thanks for sharing always a pleasure
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
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thank you
