The Feast for Beasts
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Comment from w.j.debi
I love it! This is such a creative response to the prompt with all the animals airing their views and concerns about writing, reviews and contests. The poor creatures forget that writing is what we do for fun.
Excellent examples. Love the name of Bitty the Bat.
Looks like you met all the rules and had fun doing it. The picture is perfect. This should be a real contender for this contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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I love it! This is such a creative response to the prompt with all the animals airing their views and concerns about writing, reviews and contests. The poor creatures forget that writing is what we do for fun.
Excellent examples. Love the name of Bitty the Bat.
Looks like you met all the rules and had fun doing it. The picture is perfect. This should be a real contender for this contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the great review and rating. I am so glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Trybuck
This smile is well worth the six
But probably does little to fix
All the problems here exposed
Too many minds and ears are closed
Well done with your entry, Buck
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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This smile is well worth the six
But probably does little to fix
All the problems here exposed
Too many minds and ears are closed
Well done with your entry, Buck
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the exceptional review and the honor or six stars. So sorry for the delay in replying - I was ill.
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You're very welcome, and I hope you're doing much better, Buck
Comment from angelface2
Yeltel, this is such a cute poem of animals voting and reviewing and writing poetry or whatever. I loved reading it and the rhythm was wonderful. thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Miss Sally
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Yeltel, this is such a cute poem of animals voting and reviewing and writing poetry or whatever. I loved reading it and the rhythm was wonderful. thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Miss Sally
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review. So sorry for the delay in replying.
Comment from Erik McGinley
Take out all mention of FS in the poem, and it's really cute as one of the poems that expresses different points of view.
It's not even cheap about it. The almost cartoon caption at the top tells the reader to slot themselves into whatever category without being too opinionated about it.
Really nice piece on the way different people think!
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Take out all mention of FS in the poem, and it's really cute as one of the poems that expresses different points of view.
It's not even cheap about it. The almost cartoon caption at the top tells the reader to slot themselves into whatever category without being too opinionated about it.
Really nice piece on the way different people think!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review. So sorry for the delay in replying.
