Jezebel Hell
She'll eat you alive...22 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
Had my fair share of Jezebels. Been there, don't that. Beauty for a guy can be binding. We all have our weaknesses. Nice flow and rhyming throughout. Love the setup. Great job! Les
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Had my fair share of Jezebels. Been there, don't that. Beauty for a guy can be binding. We all have our weaknesses. Nice flow and rhyming throughout. Love the setup. Great job! Les
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you very much for taking time out to review the poem, Les. I certainly appreciate your kind comments, my friend. :}
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. The beast will try and get to Jezebel. Is this you perhaps, Dean? But Jezebel gets warned extensively.
I assume he'll listen and be safe. Best wishes for the prompt.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. The beast will try and get to Jezebel. Is this you perhaps, Dean? But Jezebel gets warned extensively.
I assume he'll listen and be safe. Best wishes for the prompt.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you for taking a stab at this piece, Ine....no pun intended, lol. I very much appreciate the review. :)
