Crying is too late for you.
A song lyric.24 total reviews
Comment from royowen
It reads very much like a country lyric, it may not what you had in mind of course, but country lyrics are quite often like this. Nicely written, Ine, they are eloquently submitted and created. Yes they have a natural flow and and a smooth cadence. Although they need to have more close syllable count, otherwise the melody composed could not be compatible verse by verse, but well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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It reads very much like a country lyric, it may not what you had in mind of course, but country lyrics are quite often like this. Nicely written, Ine, they are eloquently submitted and created. Yes they have a natural flow and and a smooth cadence. Although they need to have more close syllable count, otherwise the melody composed could not be compatible verse by verse, but well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend ahead.
Comment from anabellapongasi
NIce poem-song you have written here about a love that is finished because the man is seeing another woman. Ouch, that's sad but no use crying now if it has been repeated again and again, it's best to say goodbye for good. Crying is now too late. No going back. Yeah. Did you put this to music?
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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NIce poem-song you have written here about a love that is finished because the man is seeing another woman. Ouch, that's sad but no use crying now if it has been repeated again and again, it's best to say goodbye for good. Crying is now too late. No going back. Yeah. Did you put this to music?
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thanks for your nice review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. No, a Dutch singer.
Comment from BeasPeas
More women have to take on this attitude, but sadly don't--then they jump right back in again with men who don't honor them. Good song/poem. Marilyn
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More women have to take on this attitude, but sadly don't--then they jump right back in again with men who don't honor them. Good song/poem. Marilyn
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
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Thanks for your nice review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. No, a Dutch singer.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, robina, you did an excellent job writing this song about the cheater that is told not to come back for more. I enjoyed reading this one.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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this is an excellent write, robina, you did an excellent job writing this song about the cheater that is told not to come back for more. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Thanks for your nice review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. No, a Dutch singer.