Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

Your create quite the mood from the beginning, but you also make a significant comment about the world taking a nap.

Thought it was great. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015

Thanks for reading, Ingrid. It's not about the world taking a nap but the refugees, who lost their life. Have a great day ahead!

Regards,
Anupam

reply by Spiritual Echo on 22-Sep-2015

I understood the nap as the world looking away, pretending there was no death, no crisis, so I imagine that was close to what you were sayingm

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015

Oh yes! That's a completely new perspective. Thanks for sharing this. Poetry can be highly subjective, indeed. :) Hope you're doing well.