Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 78 " Cradlesong"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
57 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Yes sir! This one was better than the espresso I have been sipping on! The scream at the end lifted be high from my seat. My blood is flowing nicely and my energy level's elevated. Masterfully(creepily)crafted my friend!
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Yes sir! This one was better than the espresso I have been sipping on! The scream at the end lifted be high from my seat. My blood is flowing nicely and my energy level's elevated. Masterfully(creepily)crafted my friend!
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Hahahaha...it woke you up did it, Steve?
Thanks for giving this one a shot. I sincerely appreciate the positive review. I'm really glad you "enjoyed?" it, heh-heh.
~Dean ;}
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Yes sir!
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Yes sir!
Comment from Ric Myworld
"The family that's slayed together stays together ... hee-hee!" Only Dean Kuch's mind runs in those channels. Now I can go clean my chair. Thanks for another fine story. :-)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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"The family that's slayed together stays together ... hee-hee!" Only Dean Kuch's mind runs in those channels. Now I can go clean my chair. Thanks for another fine story. :-)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Thanks for giving this one a shot, Ric. I sincerely appreciate the positive review. I'm really glad you "enjoyed?" it, heh-heh.
~Dean ;}
Comment from krys123
Dean;
-this has curdled my blood when I heard the scream. The timing is everything and usually put this to the test. The background music of someone sing a lullaby song was terrifying to me when I found out knowing that the wife is never been in the room in the first place.
-Knowing something is going to happen and then Waiting for it to happen are two different things and creates for good writing.
-Exceptionally written piece of work Dean.
-The composition and the pictures were relative and complementary to each other.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Dean;
-this has curdled my blood when I heard the scream. The timing is everything and usually put this to the test. The background music of someone sing a lullaby song was terrifying to me when I found out knowing that the wife is never been in the room in the first place.
-Knowing something is going to happen and then Waiting for it to happen are two different things and creates for good writing.
-Exceptionally written piece of work Dean.
-The composition and the pictures were relative and complementary to each other.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Hah-hah...Got 'cha, Alex, LOL...
Thanks so much for your continued support of these Tiny Tales of Terror. Myself, along with all of the other authors who have graciously submitted stories of their own, certainly do appreciate it. They wouldn't be a success without the kind support of readers just like you!
I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this one, and your glowing review and six stars are just the icing on an already sweet cake.
Thanks so much again, my friend.
Pleasant screams!
~Dean :}
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You got me good Dean and as always you got me guessing. You are so very welcome my friend and as always when the Lord bless and keep you.
Alex
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May He bless you & keep you as well, Alex...
~Dean :)
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Hell, this was so creepy - my mind was fixed on
the voice singing the lullaby and the words of
the story weren't penetrating my mind, so when
the singing stopped with a shriek, I had to start
reading from the beginning - Yikes!!
You're one creepy fellow, Dean.
Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Hell, this was so creepy - my mind was fixed on
the voice singing the lullaby and the words of
the story weren't penetrating my mind, so when
the singing stopped with a shriek, I had to start
reading from the beginning - Yikes!!
You're one creepy fellow, Dean.
Margaret
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Hahaha, so I've been told on more than one occasion, Margaret. In reality if you were to meet me on a busy street while walking my nine pound, eleven-year-old Chihuahua, Gidget, you'd never think I was capable of writing horror stories. If you and I were to hold an impromptu conversation in a crowded coffee house over a hot cup of tea, you would even be able to tell then. Only when I write do I allow all of the demons I keep walled-up deep inside of me come spilling out onto the page, unabashed.
Thanks so much for your kind review and rating. I appreciate it, as always.
~Dean :}
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I'm sure you're just a lovely normal fellow, Dean, but you sure know how to frighten me with your stories. Don't make them too shocking - I'm due to have stents in blocked arteries later this month and I want the surgeon to be able to find my pulse.
smile.
Margaret
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I'll do my best not to, Margaret. At least no one was disemboweled in this one, right? That's something to be thankful for. No buckets of blood, guts or gore for THIS guy, lol...
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Dean,
I really enjoyed this entry into the book. Very restrained with a great tone to it. Utterly chilling too.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Hi Dean,
I really enjoyed this entry into the book. Very restrained with a great tone to it. Utterly chilling too.
All the best
G
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Thank you, G-Man. I appreciate you taking the time to read, review, and comment on the story.
~Dean
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A pleasure. I haven't been around much lately but good to see some things don't change. Always a quality read.
G
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Yeah, I'd noticed you been silent as of late. I sure hope all is well with you, Gareth.
~Dean :}
Comment from justafan
Ya scared the crap outta me, Dean!!! Jesus mary and joseph! This was super spooky, spooky!! You added another exceptional chapter to your book with this, sugga!
Always,
Missy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Ya scared the crap outta me, Dean!!! Jesus mary and joseph! This was super spooky, spooky!! You added another exceptional chapter to your book with this, sugga!
Always,
Missy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Thanks a bunch, Missy. If it scared you, then I guess I did my job, lol.
I really appreciate the excellent feedback, as well as your time.
~Dean :}
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U did, u did u did u did!!!!
Comment from kiwijenny
Who ever came up with that lullaby was messed up.
Look into your ancestry Dean lol
I have always thought it was the strangest song
Good twist...
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Who ever came up with that lullaby was messed up.
Look into your ancestry Dean lol
I have always thought it was the strangest song
Good twist...
God bless
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Weren't they though? That particular lullaby has always given me the heebie-jeebies, which is precisely why I decided to use it, Jenny.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. As always, I appreciate it.
~Dean :}
Comment from MacMhuirich
Oh goodness, this was wonderful, the tension mounted and mounted and the old ticker started to go. I think when you encroach into the safe world of the children then you raise the suspense a bit more.
I enjoyed your terror tale.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Oh goodness, this was wonderful, the tension mounted and mounted and the old ticker started to go. I think when you encroach into the safe world of the children then you raise the suspense a bit more.
I enjoyed your terror tale.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Scary stories involving kids always give me the greatest chills, John. And that's exactly why I utilize them quite often, especially in flash and micro fiction where you need maximum impact while utilizing very few words.
Thanks so much for your positive feedback and review. I certainly appreciate it.
~Dean :}
Comment from Eric1
Wow Dean, My heart started pounding harder the further I got into this brilliant little story, by the time the headlights were involved it was pounding loudly! You have a wonderful knack of building the tension and getting the readers attention!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Wow Dean, My heart started pounding harder the further I got into this brilliant little story, by the time the headlights were involved it was pounding loudly! You have a wonderful knack of building the tension and getting the readers attention!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Eric. That is very kind of you to say, my friend.
I appreciate you taking time to read this latest Tiny Tale, and for the positive feedback as well.
Have a great one today!
~Dean :}
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You are very welcome Dean,
Comment from LIJ Red
The voice is his wife's voice. The car-minus one fender-is being returned by her lowlife brother who borrowed it...else some lonely ghost is volunteering to babysit...excellent spooky yarn.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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The voice is his wife's voice. The car-minus one fender-is being returned by her lowlife brother who borrowed it...else some lonely ghost is volunteering to babysit...excellent spooky yarn.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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Yes sir, It could'a happened just that way, Red.
Thanks very much for the fun review. As always, I appreciate your comments as well as your valuable time, my friend.
~Dean :}
