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A Song Lyric'

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Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Ine Very well done from start to finish. I especially liked these lines:

"Oh life is so beautiful, you have to share it
Cause it is already so short, enjoy it now"

Suggestion: "If you are with me, his can last o very long (Is this supposed to be last SO very long?)

Blessings, Bob

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.