Tiny Tales of Terror
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Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL! Now this story is one of those that has me not knowing what to think. It's almost funny, but then, my stomach is so queasy thinking about a piranha-faced newborn biting off the nurse's hand as he emerges from the womb. Thanks for another fine story. :-)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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LOL! Now this story is one of those that has me not knowing what to think. It's almost funny, but then, my stomach is so queasy thinking about a piranha-faced newborn biting off the nurse's hand as he emerges from the womb. Thanks for another fine story. :-)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Yeah, well, that's what it's 'sposed to do to ya', Ric. I wrote it so you'd feel repulsed but unable to keep from laughing at the same time. Well, that's what I was hopin' for, anyway. Based on the reviews I've been receiving, I'm not too sure whether I succeeded or failed miserably.
Thanks for the read & review.
~Dean
Comment from Gert sherwood
Darn Dean no sixes to give to you
I could see in the ultra sound the cause of the well told short terrifying cause of the lost of the Doctors hands
Great addition to the Horro multi Authors book
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Darn Dean no sixes to give to you
I could see in the ultra sound the cause of the well told short terrifying cause of the lost of the Doctors hands
Great addition to the Horro multi Authors book
Gert
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thanks, Gert, and no sixes are ever necessary, not as long as you enjoyed reading it. That's the important thing--what really matters to me. Heck, I'm all outta sixes myself, LOL.
Thanks for the review.
~Dean :)
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Good You are welcome Dean
Comment from Bill Schott
Looks like the OBGYN became the OMG where's my hands! Babies with choppers is no joke (though I found it funny, albeit definitely not sanitary... not sanitary at all!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Looks like the OBGYN became the OMG where's my hands! Babies with choppers is no joke (though I found it funny, albeit definitely not sanitary... not sanitary at all!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thanks, Bill. I wanted this to be more funny that scary. You know, a little black humor, just to lighten the mood?
Thanks for confirming for me that it came across that way to you.
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Ulla
Oh you are incorrigible Dean. In all its horror I actually liked this one a lot. Just imagining it puts the fright on and at the same time I laughed rather perversely. Black humour if I've ever seen it. Well done. All best. Ulla
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Oh you are incorrigible Dean. In all its horror I actually liked this one a lot. Just imagining it puts the fright on and at the same time I laughed rather perversely. Black humour if I've ever seen it. Well done. All best. Ulla
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thanks, Ulla. I'm happy you let me know the dark humor came through. This was intended to be more funny than anything else. I guess I succeeded, at least as far as you are concerned. That's good enough for me!
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. As always, I deeply appreciate it.
~Dean ;)
Comment from I am Cat
I'm NOT breast feeding that thing, Dean! Nope!
No way, no how! :(
32 razor sharp teeth?
Yowch!
Nope... nada. zilch.
This is, of course, another great tiny tale... and yet another that
freaked my dogs out when the audio came on. LOL
They are like, "HuH?" LOL
titillating... one of my all time favorite words. ;)
Well done... again!
Cat
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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I'm NOT breast feeding that thing, Dean! Nope!
No way, no how! :(
32 razor sharp teeth?
Yowch!
Nope... nada. zilch.
This is, of course, another great tiny tale... and yet another that
freaked my dogs out when the audio came on. LOL
They are like, "HuH?" LOL
titillating... one of my all time favorite words. ;)
Well done... again!
Cat
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thanks, Cat. My doggies ain't too keen on the sound fx either. They keep thinkin' there's someone here in the room with us. Who knows, maybe there is?
That's a million for the review.
~Dean :}
Comment from Muffins
O.K. This kid( please close your ears God) needs and accidental drowning in the bath or ocean. Goody , Goody doctors, if they had any sense, would accidentally shove the needle in the spine of this things and spare the parents. Is this to evil a solution?
Each word rumbles with mysterious, fear and suspense. The last sentence is a cliff hanger I don't know if I want to know the outcome... well maybe.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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O.K. This kid( please close your ears God) needs and accidental drowning in the bath or ocean. Goody , Goody doctors, if they had any sense, would accidentally shove the needle in the spine of this things and spare the parents. Is this to evil a solution?
Each word rumbles with mysterious, fear and suspense. The last sentence is a cliff hanger I don't know if I want to know the outcome... well maybe.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Yeah, hopefully the docs would put these poor parents outta their misery, Muffins. And the kid too. I mean, c'mon, what kind'a life would this kid have? He'd be constantly bullied, then he'd turn around and eat his tormentors.
Not good...
Thanks a bunch for the read and review.
~Dean :}
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Handsome :)
LOL you have a very dark sense of humor LOL Awesome new chapter for Tiny Tales of Terrors, I should add one to the collection. This one was as delicious as mama's little hand. Just thinking about breastfeeding that monster gives me the shivers. This tale reminds me of an old story I read years ago. It was titled "IT" and was about a deformed baby with a taste for human flesh too. It was made into a movie by the same name. It was a pretty good B horror movie.
Happy Halloween to you too, Darlin'
~Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Hello Handsome :)
LOL you have a very dark sense of humor LOL Awesome new chapter for Tiny Tales of Terrors, I should add one to the collection. This one was as delicious as mama's little hand. Just thinking about breastfeeding that monster gives me the shivers. This tale reminds me of an old story I read years ago. It was titled "IT" and was about a deformed baby with a taste for human flesh too. It was made into a movie by the same name. It was a pretty good B horror movie.
Happy Halloween to you too, Darlin'
~Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Yeah, I realize I'm a bit warped, darlin'. But at least I try to use it for a creative purpose, LOL.
Hey, look at how fu@ked up Quentin Tarentino is. But he's a great guy in person, I got to meet him once in Northern Nevada while he was shooting From Dusk 'til Dawn with George Clooney. I'm not sure where old George was, though. It would'a been nice to have met him too.
But all that aside, thanks for takin' a peek at this sick little Tiny Tale. me along with all of the other fantastic authors who have become a part of this book sure do appreciate your continued support!
HUGE HUGS!!!
~Dean ;}
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I love Quentin Tarentino's movies. From Dusk 'til Dawn was an awesome movie that surprised me big time. I didn't expect what the story was about. I would love to meet him in person. Pulp Fiction was another awesome movie. I would love to meet sexy George Clooney too.
Comment from evilynne
What are his teething biscuits made of? Bones with raw meat? Does he have a gnawing hunger? (o.k., I'm done with the bad jokes) Evi
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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What are his teething biscuits made of? Bones with raw meat? Does he have a gnawing hunger? (o.k., I'm done with the bad jokes) Evi
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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I'd be kind of afraid to ask what they're made of, Evi. In fact, you wouldn't catch me within 100 yards of that...thing.
Someone once told me that babies are really cute, in their own special way. U-h-h-h-h...I beg to differ.
Thanks a bunch for the sixer and for making me laugh. I should have you start writing the epilogues in my author's notes...heh-heh...
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!
~Dean ;}
Comment from TomyKan
An unusual story of terror and creepiness. You have a knack for writing this kind of thing. Wherever did you get the photo ?
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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An unusual story of terror and creepiness. You have a knack for writing this kind of thing. Wherever did you get the photo ?
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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The photo was borrowed from a friend of mine on photobucket.com, Tomy. As for where she got it, well...I'm kind'a ashamed to admit it, but I'm too afraid to ask her.
Thanks so much for your comments.
~Dean
Comment from krys123
Dean;
-I don't know what you enjoy the most writing these horribly ecstatic Stories or enticing us with your author's notes. Both than either of them are willingly wonderful. And thank you again for the experience.
-Titillating! Chuckle!
-Was his baby when he use as a rattler? Maybe channel iron may be a landmine on a stick.
-Again you impressively acted out in a very unusual manner in your writing needn't have gave a warning about language or situation the warning should've been your office notes on being corny. Chuckle!
-Thank you so kindly my friend for sharing and posting this as you made me chuckle all the way through with horror, of course.
-The Lord be with you always Dean and Go Cincinnati I believe they should take an easy win over New England. As a new animal find a way to cheat but Cincinnati won't even care. But Cincinnati just to get past my Steelers now that they have a new quarterback name Landry. I think Big Ben will be back By then.
Alex
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Dean;
-I don't know what you enjoy the most writing these horribly ecstatic Stories or enticing us with your author's notes. Both than either of them are willingly wonderful. And thank you again for the experience.
-Titillating! Chuckle!
-Was his baby when he use as a rattler? Maybe channel iron may be a landmine on a stick.
-Again you impressively acted out in a very unusual manner in your writing needn't have gave a warning about language or situation the warning should've been your office notes on being corny. Chuckle!
-Thank you so kindly my friend for sharing and posting this as you made me chuckle all the way through with horror, of course.
-The Lord be with you always Dean and Go Cincinnati I believe they should take an easy win over New England. As a new animal find a way to cheat but Cincinnati won't even care. But Cincinnati just to get past my Steelers now that they have a new quarterback name Landry. I think Big Ben will be back By then.
Alex
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Hahaha, well, Alex. This particular Tiny Tale was intended to be funnier than it was scary. besides, I find that horror and humor work really well together, don't you? It sort'a eases the tension just a bit.
Thanks again for your indepth review. I deeply appreciate it as always.
With respect
~Dean :)
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Dean; when you mention the word titillating I thought it was very much a humorous poem.
Also, you are so very welcome my dear friend and it is my pleasure.
Alex