Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "For Your Heartache Today"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from littlebit69
I enjoyed reading your poem concerning your lost love. Some times we can move too fast. One thing I do know is if she's meant for you... You'll get her back If not you won't. Just learn from this expreince and take your time before you let go.
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I enjoyed reading your poem concerning your lost love. Some times we can move too fast. One thing I do know is if she's meant for you... You'll get her back If not you won't. Just learn from this expreince and take your time before you let go.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from doggymad
This was a very moving work and one that will resonate with many readers.
It is always sad when relationships break down especially when it is one sided.
hugs
Freda
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This was a very moving work and one that will resonate with many readers.
It is always sad when relationships break down especially when it is one sided.
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Already Sunday and you get my last six. This is excellent and I love th meaning and the words.
I can feel the emotion you put in this song and that is the reason I read pieces. I wan the feeling
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Already Sunday and you get my last six. This is excellent and I love th meaning and the words.
I can feel the emotion you put in this song and that is the reason I read pieces. I wan the feeling
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Comment from OnyxSapphire78
This is a beautiful poem of heartache (which most definitely really hurts) and sorrow. The repeating line is very effective and this has such a smooth flow. I really enjoyed this piece! Thank you for sharing! Happy writing!
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This is a beautiful poem of heartache (which most definitely really hurts) and sorrow. The repeating line is very effective and this has such a smooth flow. I really enjoyed this piece! Thank you for sharing! Happy writing!
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Comment from dmt1967
This would make a nice country song. I can picture a well-known country star strumming away on his guitar and singing this song about a long lost love. Great poem and thank you for sharing.
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This would make a nice country song. I can picture a well-known country star strumming away on his guitar and singing this song about a long lost love. Great poem and thank you for sharing.
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Comment from J Dan Francis
This piece was excellent. I liked the flow and the line at the end of each stanza. I didn't realize when I started reading this that it was song lyric poetry. I was just expecting poetry, then halfway through I said to myself, "This would make for a great song." I'm no expert on music but I picked up on that...So I must say "Mission Accomplished"
Great piece
Be Well
JD
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This piece was excellent. I liked the flow and the line at the end of each stanza. I didn't realize when I started reading this that it was song lyric poetry. I was just expecting poetry, then halfway through I said to myself, "This would make for a great song." I'm no expert on music but I picked up on that...So I must say "Mission Accomplished"
Great piece
Be Well
JD
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from misscookie
Now that's what i call a down home blues song
I can hear that guitar string plucking away
Thank you for sharing. boy can I relate. LOL
Cookie
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Now that's what i call a down home blues song
I can hear that guitar string plucking away
Thank you for sharing. boy can I relate. LOL
Cookie
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
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miss cookie glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support always appreciated.
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It was my pleasure , have a bless Sunday.
Cookie
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You too! miss cookie.
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Thank you very much.
Cookie
Comment from trumby
Beautiful song lyrics. But the sadness is very obvious too. Its really true that we can only realize the importance of someone when they are gone already. I love this:
The way I feel for you, love, will never go away.
Lovely. Thanks for sharing,
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Beautiful song lyrics. But the sadness is very obvious too. Its really true that we can only realize the importance of someone when they are gone already. I love this:
The way I feel for you, love, will never go away.
Lovely. Thanks for sharing,
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
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Comment from writeapoem
Crying wolf could image compliments the story. The rhyme flow was good and I enjoyed your sharing of this love gone sour and I could you suffered in the hours before writing inviting me to share your pain. All the best
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Crying wolf could image compliments the story. The rhyme flow was good and I enjoyed your sharing of this love gone sour and I could you suffered in the hours before writing inviting me to share your pain. All the best
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