Comment from winnona

Excellent

Really good. I love your choice of words in the poem. They flow together very nicely creating the message of the poem to the reader. Your choice of artwork and color background complete the poem well. The background music always completes it all.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thanks for checking it out, Winnona.
Much obliged. :)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

lol - oh my gosh Dean, this is great - a look at the horror and the erotic side of Gyspy's wonderful writing:) loved it.

Teresa

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thanks for reading and responding, "t".
Appreciate it. :)

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Some great lines here, Dean. So, I'm smiling by the end of the first stanza. Fess up time - yes, my mind had half-slid into the gutter. Third stanza it slid entirely into the gutter and I laughed out loud.

Horrible fun. Love it! Did you do that artwork?

Av

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Hahaha, my mind is perpetually in the gutter, Av.
No, that artwork isn't mine. I wish!
Thanks very much for checking this out. :)

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Haaha, this is good. Il like this one, the play on Dick, she a bad girl and all, great job on this, Great wit and humor on this. Enjoy the day

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thanks for checking it out, William.
I appreciate your comments.
~Dean

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I really enjoyed your play on words with, "girlfiend". It's hilarious and worrisome at the same time. You have a great picture to go with it. You really drive the whole theme home here, Dick, er um I mean Dean. I'd feel safe with her patrolling the neighborhood in the event of a horror movie happening in my neiborhood. She'd put those murderers in her backpack and we'd all be safe. Does she do zombies too?

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Zombies, voodoo---you name it, she's into it if there's a creep factor involved.
Thanks for reading, Joy.
~Dean

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I thought this was a fun one, Dean. That is some girlfriend you've got LOL. I like the reference to Lord of the Rings. Rhyme and flow are good. Mostly this is just a fun muse

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Yeah, just for kicks, Douglas.
Thanks for reading.
~Dean

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

What a great description of a true love match for two horror enthusiast! It sounds like she can bring love to you in reckless abandon and do poetic justice to you as well! Enjoy and savor each horrific kiss and enjoy being roytish!â?¤•¸?

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Will do, Ginnygray, and thanks for reading.
~Dean

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Well, it seems that you have found the perfect woman. Having something in common is the glue that leads to longevity. I know a guy named Richard, who's affectionately called "Big Dick" by his friends. Your poem is well rhymed and interesting. Best lines for me are:
"She struts through the woods in Daisy Dukes,
ripe rotting corpses can't make her puke.
What she searches for, I have no clue.
Just pray, my friend, that it ain't you."
Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Thanks, Marilyn. I appreciate the read and review.
~Dean

Comment from Mastery

Exceptional

Groovy dude! LOL. This picture is enough to give us a different slant on your first name "dick" than what you are professing, my friend. Run into someone like this in the woods and see howlong ittakes to get your pants down. LOL...great job, my friend. I love your humor as usual. Bob

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

I could drop my drawers in about 2.4 seconds, Bob, and the majority of that time would involve unbuckling my belt, LOL.
Thanks for the read and the sixer.
I appreciate your comments. :)
~DeanO

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This put a huge smile on my face. You did another just outstanding job penning this. Way to go. You are King Author. This is so great. Wow.....

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

No, I'm King Nothing, Angie. The metal band, Metallica, wrote a song about me you might have heard.
Thanks...