Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem you have penned for the contest. I like the very descriptive wording you used and the imagery you used with this poem. Good luck in the contest. Teri

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

I am having the time of my life writing poetry to these new styles. I had not realized there were so many and each one is a challenge. Thanks for your review and kind words. Have a blessed weekend.

Comment from Crennan87

Excellent

I love the seasons, especially spring. I really admire the way your words described the season. Wonderful work. Best of luck in the contest!

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

I am having the time of my life writing poetry to these new styles. I had not realized there were so many and each one is a challenge. Thanks for your review and kind words. Have a blessed weekend.

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Annie, very lovely poem. Yes, we all have our favorite seasons of
the year. I like Spring and Fall both. Spring with everything starting
to bloom and come alive again. I like the style you did your poem in.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

I am having the time of my life writing poetry to these new styles. I had not realized there were so many and each one is a challenge. Thanks for your review and kind words. Have a blessed weekend.

reply by heyjude on 30-Jun-2016

I'm glad you're having fun with them. You have a blessed weekend too. Judy

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Excellent entry into the "Write an Awdl Gynt Poem" contest. Your rhyming is awesome and the smoothness of the read made it so pleasurable for this reviewer. Seems you have met the requirements of the form you attempted. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

I am having the time of my life writing poetry to these new styles. I had not realized there were so many and each one is a challenge. Thanks for your review and kind words. Have a blessed weekend.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

This is a wonderful write. I love the content and you have given us great imagery from start to finish. My favourite season is Autumn, I love to see the colours as nature settles down to sleep. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

I am having the time of my life writing poetry to these new styles. I had not realized there were so many and each one is a challenge. Thanks for your review and kind words. Have a blessed weekend.

Comment from RodG

Good

I, too, am most fond of spring for the same reasons you cite.
GOOD: the imagery describing spring in stanzas 2, 4, and 5.
The varied rhyme pattern
WEAK: your title says "Wonders of the SeasonS" but you barely mention winter and say nothing about summer or autumn. You might consider changing your title rather than extending the poem.

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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

You are absolutely right on the title. I will change it per your suggestion. Thanks for the tip and have a good day.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Great job on your contest entry, Anniedawn!

You sound like a nature lover, and that every season holds appeal for you, but especially Spring. :) I love Spring best too. Wonderful to see the rebirth of plants and feel warmer temps again.

Well written and conforms to the stipulations for this particular contest. My favorite lines are: "The Crocus and the Tulip shy" and "Each season has a touch of class".

Well done! Best wishes for the contest!

Connie

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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for your review. I did change the word 'Seasons' in the title to 'Spring' per another reviewer's suggestion. Have a great day.