Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

red tailed hawk."
(red-tailed)

A well written chapter, my friend. Digging in the desert sounds like hard, hot work. I do think the above is usually hyphenated. Looking forward to more~Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you, Debbie. I'll change it to red-tailed, though it was a toss up when I looked it up. Still, it looks better that way. Thanks so much,
Rhonda

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Once again, this is a great post, filled with emotion and descriptions for our reading pleasure. I really like this novel. Keep up the writing.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you so much, Barbara. You are such a sweetheart, and I appreciate your support. I will continue on this novel for a while. It still has a long way to go. Thanks you for everything, especially the more than generous six star rating!!.
Rhonda

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

So, Archie's destiny revealed?

Breathe in, breath out - breathe out?

Ayala snipped - not sure about snipped, maybe sniped?

Yes, Koko and I reasearched it. - researched.

Some nice revelations in this chapter.
G

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

I didn't really like snipped, either. I'll work on it.

Thanks for the wonderful and careful review. I fixed those mistakes already, but not before you read it. I am so very glad you found them, because you are often the only one who finds them for me.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Excellently written and I love the way you wove all their lives together as he being sent to help the people under the influence of a time gone wrong.
Very good ending as I see she had to think

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you for your sweet and supportive review, my friend. Always nice to have you drop by.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Continues to be very interesting and unique. I do hope the three of them can succeed. Sure, it will be a shock to the people of Hokee, but they'll adjust when they find what's out there in the world hidden from them. Well, most of them, I hope.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you for the wonderful six star rating, my friend, and for the great review. I appreciate your viewpoint! I respect what you have to say.

Their hope is to bring the change that's needed for these unfortunate people. Unfortunately, they'll find some resistance, and some information that might come in conflict with their goals.

Thank you again!!
Rhonda

Comment from mbroyles2

Exceptional

The cat is out of the bag now. I like Sani's approach to "see the hole, dig the hole "
I'm hoping Ayala cones around to Archie's way of thinking. I see her leaning.
Great story!
Michael

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you, Michael. Ayala is angry, but she does love her sister, and like women, everywhere, there is a fascination with the whole pregnancy/birth adventure.

Thanks for the stars, and thanks for the comments.
Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

As always your writing is flawless, I love your character and your chapters always make for fantastic reading. A really fascinating story, written well and enjoyed very much by me, kindest regards, Meia :)

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Rhonda