Patty
A friendship cut short22 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
An excellent tribute to a unique and special friend. I see no problems with the story line or the words. Very well done. I assume you and her sister live close together?
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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An excellent tribute to a unique and special friend. I see no problems with the story line or the words. Very well done. I assume you and her sister live close together?
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Barb, I prematurely released that while I was still working on it :/ I appreciate your kind words and review very much.
Comment from Mustang Patty
My heart aches for the loss of your friend. Yes, all too soon, the really good ones are taken from this earth. Perhaps they simply completed their mission.
You must have dashed this off in a hurry. There are several places where the wrong words are used, and many instances of missing words from your sentences. I'm sure if you give it a read-through out loud, you will be able to find them.
Thank you for sharing these memories,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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My heart aches for the loss of your friend. Yes, all too soon, the really good ones are taken from this earth. Perhaps they simply completed their mission.
You must have dashed this off in a hurry. There are several places where the wrong words are used, and many instances of missing words from your sentences. I'm sure if you give it a read-through out loud, you will be able to find them.
Thank you for sharing these memories,
~patty~
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks Patty, I'm still working on it and prematurely hit 'go'.
