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Friendship

Acrostic-Loop

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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Trying different styles is what helps you to become a more well-rounded and versatile poet, Anonymous Author.
At least I believe so.
Having said that, I've written a loop acrostic a time or two. They aren't as easy to write as they appear to be.
You've done a splendid job with your entry, however. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
    Thank you and yes it is helping me understand a lot more
Comment from Hitcher
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I think your a braver man/or woman than me friend... a acrostic and a loop combined, my head hurts just thinking about it : ) Rather you than me!
That said, I think you have done a sound job of fusing the two forms together. Good luck!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2017


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    Thank
Comment from RGstar
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Not a bad go at this form. Good interlocking features that give a humane look and feel of this short verse. Anything with comradeship always up my street.
Good luck with the entry.
RGstar

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2017


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    Thank you very much
Comment from Knighteagle
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A different style of poetry than I have seen before, though you did a great job as you said you are trying different styles. Some good truths people could use to remember in there. Finding strength and hope. Keep up the good work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017


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    Thank you very much
Comment from LIJ Red
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An interesting prompt. A good choice of styles to meld, too. I think the styles that mix well are limited. Well, a limeronnet or a trioku might work out okay. Excellent post.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thank you very muck
Comment from Janet Foor
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I am not familiar with this form at all but I enjoyed reading your combinations poem for the contest and wish you the best of luck.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017


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    Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Not seen this form before and it is interesting and well executed with warm sentiments of human behaviour and our need to make friends, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017


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    Thank you very much
Comment from Irish Rain
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How wonderfully ambitious! The loop is hard enough, so is the acrostic, but combined? Wow...I think you might have a winner!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017


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    Thank you very much
Comment from JDRBAR
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This seems like a very difficult type poem. You did a very good job with it. I like the premise of the intent to find the friendship we all crave. Good luck with this.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017


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    Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written and clever thought out combination poem. Making use of the acrostic and the loop poem for a very I terestin poem about ftirndship.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thank you very much