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Comment from jenintorre
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Ah. What a lovely little loop poem. (Hey I am learning the names of all the obscure poetry styles) this is a very romantic and well written poem. I wish you luck in the competition. Jen.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written love, acrostic, loop poem. True love doesn't need big words to.make it impressive. Simply plain words tell it better in style and overall appearance. When it is found, don't let it go.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, and I will not****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is a two-for. Two poems for the price of one. A love poem and that other kind who's name escapes me right now. Both are very good. Maybe you invented a new style, ambidextrous poetry.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, I like your new name for a poem form, All so liked your script I just read, re your competition. Well done****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
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Well congratulations on finding true love and being inspired by it to write this loop poem! Short, sweet and to the point. Life is full of surprises and you got the cherry on top. Well done!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from DR DIP
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Kahpot , You have everything going on in this fine piece of poetry Acrostic, loop and a contest entry to cap it off. I think this is a great entry and says so much in 4 lines

thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
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An acrostic, a love poem, and a loop to boot.
This begs the question: How many poetic forms can one cram into one single post or poem?
The answer?
About three...
Good luck, kahpot.
~Dean

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, and I think three is enough****kahpot
reply by Dean Kuch on 06-Nov-2017
    I agree.
Comment from pbomar1115
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It is a wonderful thing when two become one, making life enjoyable as well productive in every undertaking one has. It will give a noticeable outlook that everyone can see--the before and the after. Good luck in the contest.

Phillip

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much****kahpot
reply by pbomar1115 on 06-Nov-2017
    You're welcome.
Comment from rjuselius
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this is a fine piece of romance poetry in a loop form dear kahpot! i also like the way you begin and end in the same word. and besides the content is absolutely right and true.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from trumby
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This is a nice love poem, and I enjoyed how you wrote it, a loop poem. As a bloke (man), I thought It would be hard to handle, but when I found my true love, I realized having someone is wonderful. Good luck in your love and thanks for sharing a beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you very much, and yes having someone is wonderful****kahpot
Comment from JanPerry
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I'm so glad u have embraced love into your life.
I guess, as a man, love is hard to handle. Yet, as a woman, we seek it all our lives. Just hope it works out for you.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Many thanks and yes I have and must say as a Man so do we, and I too hope so, Many thanks, My Friend****kahpot