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Together- A Quatern21 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The quatern is one of my favorite style, kahpot. I always add rhyme to mine as you did. You did a super job with your first attempt at one. Your rhymes are great, the lines read smoothly, the repeating line fits in seamlessly, & your message is strong & clear. I commend you for trying new style. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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The quatern is one of my favorite style, kahpot. I always add rhyme to mine as you did. You did a super job with your first attempt at one. Your rhymes are great, the lines read smoothly, the repeating line fits in seamlessly, & your message is strong & clear. I commend you for trying new style. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much, this is what I love about members on FS very encouraging****kahpot
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You are welcome. I have several quaterns in my portfolio if you would like to peruse 1 or more in your free time.
