FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Labor Day.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
61 total reviews
Comment from heart of Lou
Very funny! Neither of them is much interested in doing any actual labor this Labor Day. Hey, I think I'm re-tired too. I know I've been tired before so I guess I just re-tire and re-tire.
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Very funny! Neither of them is much interested in doing any actual labor this Labor Day. Hey, I think I'm re-tired too. I know I've been tired before so I guess I just re-tire and re-tire.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
You got my full attention rhonnie69
about the conversation between husband and wife talking about getting a part job, even if he is
re-tired
Must be read, especially, the punch line at the end of the joke Gert
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You got my full attention rhonnie69
about the conversation between husband and wife talking about getting a part job, even if he is
re-tired
Must be read, especially, the punch line at the end of the joke Gert
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Ronnie;
>You capture the essence in your enjambment in context the very essence of a typical conversation between a wife and her, lazy good for nothing stand around sit down and do as much is not possible, husband.
>I have because I knew of the outcome but the way you did it made it much funnier.
>"all day,(comma) every day
>Thank you for sharing, Ronnie, take care and have a good one especially because you just may deserve it.
Alx
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Cheers, Ronnie;
>You capture the essence in your enjambment in context the very essence of a typical conversation between a wife and her, lazy good for nothing stand around sit down and do as much is not possible, husband.
>I have because I knew of the outcome but the way you did it made it much funnier.
>"all day,(comma) every day
>Thank you for sharing, Ronnie, take care and have a good one especially because you just may deserve it.
Alx
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from RGstar
Dialogue a plenty, yet, the work has to be done...by whom? Good idea for sharing, so bringing it to the attention only highlights the cause.
Fun to read. Message delivered.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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Dialogue a plenty, yet, the work has to be done...by whom? Good idea for sharing, so bringing it to the attention only highlights the cause.
Fun to read. Message delivered.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from TPAC
An interesting story holding many captivating aspects I found appealing to my interests. A slight revision might help this write flow. All in my opinion of this write.
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An interesting story holding many captivating aspects I found appealing to my interests. A slight revision might help this write flow. All in my opinion of this write.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from dmt1967
I had to smile at this one. The hubby sounds like my family lol. It is amazing how going slow makes them move faster lol. Great script in a poem. Thank you for sharing and take care.
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I had to smile at this one. The hubby sounds like my family lol. It is amazing how going slow makes them move faster lol. Great script in a poem. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from jaded831
Once a spouse retires, the couple tend to get under eachother, and not in a good way. More than likely, she was hinting, he get a job. Great imagery, and true to life, easy to relate to. Especially to we who are retired. Thanks for the laugh.
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Once a spouse retires, the couple tend to get under eachother, and not in a good way. More than likely, she was hinting, he get a job. Great imagery, and true to life, easy to relate to. Especially to we who are retired. Thanks for the laugh.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I like your sense of humor
for labor day; a refreshing
and different approach.
-Obviously, the husband and
wife have different ideas,
but I think she got her
message across better!
-Thanks for sharing, rhonnie69.
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-Nice image.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I like your sense of humor
for labor day; a refreshing
and different approach.
-Obviously, the husband and
wife have different ideas,
but I think she got her
message across better!
-Thanks for sharing, rhonnie69.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
Clever and totally unfair to us men. Hehe.
In ths day and age we should be asking why she isn't looking for work rather than pushing him at it. Or would that be sexist? LOL.
Nice work Rhonnie.
Bill (WildWithWords)
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Clever and totally unfair to us men. Hehe.
In ths day and age we should be asking why she isn't looking for work rather than pushing him at it. Or would that be sexist? LOL.
Nice work Rhonnie.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice conversation about retirement. How it can be boring and not what a couple things it could be. I like the wife threatening retirement from her duties. That means the husband would have to cook and clean for himself. That got him moving. This threat wouldn't work for me because my husband does most of the cooking.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Nice conversation about retirement. How it can be boring and not what a couple things it could be. I like the wife threatening retirement from her duties. That means the husband would have to cook and clean for himself. That got him moving. This threat wouldn't work for me because my husband does most of the cooking.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
