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Comment from beizanten
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A very good beginning paragraph. what is no Ls mean other than that I think the second paragraph is pretty good. You have quite a talent here. A pretty good third and fourth stanza. I like the ending, good luck!

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    They sometimes have contests to write poems without using a particular letter. Thanks for giving this a look.