Night Diamonds
contest entry36 total reviews
Comment from Connie Frazier
This poem captures perfectly, in such a short space, the magic of moonlight on snow. It's one of life's little pleasures that I enjoy so much. This is nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This poem captures perfectly, in such a short space, the magic of moonlight on snow. It's one of life's little pleasures that I enjoy so much. This is nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments for my winter poem, Connie. I appreciate your time to read and share your thoughts. I love the sparkles of the snow, too. Thanks
Comment from Rob Caudle
Hey kiddo nice to see another piece for you. AS always it firs the form pefectly and puts us in the snowladen moonlit scene. I think you will do well n the contest.
Rob
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Hey kiddo nice to see another piece for you. AS always it firs the form pefectly and puts us in the snowladen moonlit scene. I think you will do well n the contest.
Rob
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments for my winter poem, Rob. I truly appreciate your time to read and share your thoughts, and I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I owe you a million reviews!
Kiddo
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your just in time the piece thats up now re-unites Jess and Wilson sex up soon lol
Comment from June Sargent
Very well done - these short forms can feel contrived. And sometimes they just don't make sense. But you've painted a lovely scene with 3 short lines. And the artwork is perfect. Should do well in the contest.
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Very well done - these short forms can feel contrived. And sometimes they just don't make sense. But you've painted a lovely scene with 3 short lines. And the artwork is perfect. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments for my winter poem, June. I appreciate your time to read and share your thoughts. Thanks!
Comment from victor 66
Oh so very true, moonlight does capture a night's snowfall in a pristine way. Snow can makes it a wonderland that can take one's breath away. Now, if you see this landscape when it's fifty below, it's good, just not as good as, lets say twenty degrees above. Good look in the contest.
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Oh so very true, moonlight does capture a night's snowfall in a pristine way. Snow can makes it a wonderland that can take one's breath away. Now, if you see this landscape when it's fifty below, it's good, just not as good as, lets say twenty degrees above. Good look in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments for my winter poem, Victor. I appreciate your time to read and share your thoughts, and I'm pleased you enjoyed the imagery.Thanks!
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I grew up and lived most of my adult life in Minnesota. If you didn't appreciate the snow, you'd be pretty miserable. You are welcome, Karyn.
Comment from Boogienights
This well written contest entry really creates a picture in the mind, I can just see what you are describing. Such a lovely image too. Best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This well written contest entry really creates a picture in the mind, I can just see what you are describing. Such a lovely image too. Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments for my winter poem, Boogienights. I appreciate your time to read and share your thoughts. I'm pleased you enjoyed the imagery.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2 syllable poem, Night Diamonds, has the proper formatting and presents a visual spectacle as light dances off settled snow on a quiet scene. Nice.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This 2-5-2 syllable poem, Night Diamonds, has the proper formatting and presents a visual spectacle as light dances off settled snow on a quiet scene. Nice.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments for my winter poem, Bill. I appreciate your time to read and share your thoughts. Thanks so much!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about the snowflakes in the moonlight is the most pristine sight. They fall like little diamonds from the sky at night. A beautiful picture as well.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about the snowflakes in the moonlight is the most pristine sight. They fall like little diamonds from the sky at night. A beautiful picture as well.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, for your great review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, not only it's breath taking, is beautiful and a perfect match.
I always thought of them a little diamonds or angle dust.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, not only it's breath taking, is beautiful and a perfect match.
I always thought of them a little diamonds or angle dust.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Oh, Miss Cookie, I'm so honored by your generous six-star rating and especiallly by your very kind review and comments. Thank you for your kind response, an I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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Good day to you
Your very welcome. Have a blessed day
Cookie
Comment from jenintorre
I love the beautiful imagery in the words of this poem and the well chosen artwork says it all. I think this is an excellent entry for the 2-5-2 competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I love the beautiful imagery in the words of this poem and the well chosen artwork says it all. I think this is an excellent entry for the 2-5-2 competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Jen, for your great review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the imagery.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
This is a very good 2-5-2. The poem paints a picture on its own, but the two work really well together. I love the verb "captures". Good luck in the contest.
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This is a very good 2-5-2. The poem paints a picture on its own, but the two work really well together. I love the verb "captures". Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Rhonda, for your great review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)