Life
A contest entry25 total reviews
Comment from RodG
You make the reader ponder his philosophy of life which is not unusual this long drawn-out winter. Provocative in only twenty syllables. Rod
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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You make the reader ponder his philosophy of life which is not unusual this long drawn-out winter. Provocative in only twenty syllables. Rod
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is
perfect and compliments this poem well.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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The author's words are interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is
perfect and compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from Artasylum
It is a sad thought that life is never ending circle instead it becomes the circle of life... the image is very interesting... good luck to you on your contest... yours, diana
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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It is a sad thought that life is never ending circle instead it becomes the circle of life... the image is very interesting... good luck to you on your contest... yours, diana
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. And your good luck wishes.
Comment from Jennifer Carr
I like this 20 syllable poem about Life. I do have 2 suggestions though. One is - maybe the last sentence is it a never ending circle maybe should have a question mark instead of a period? Secondly, I read your poem multiple times and counted 21 syllables... but great piece :)
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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I like this 20 syllable poem about Life. I do have 2 suggestions though. One is - maybe the last sentence is it a never ending circle maybe should have a question mark instead of a period? Secondly, I read your poem multiple times and counted 21 syllables... but great piece :)
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. I will definitely change it to a question mark and using a syllable counter it was 20 but I will check.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and presentation.
-You have a good topic
and poem for the contest.
-The use of questions is
effective, as the reader can
form his/her own opinion.
-I like how you offer
possibilities, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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-Good image and presentation.
-You have a good topic
and poem for the contest.
-The use of questions is
effective, as the reader can
form his/her own opinion.
-I like how you offer
possibilities, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. I will change it to a question mark and I will recheck the count. Thanks for the good luck wishes.
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You are very welcome. I revised your review to reflect the changes. A good job.