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Blended Reality

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A collection of stories: Some True, some not

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Comment from Bichon
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I am very happy to hear that it all worked out in the end and now your wife is cancer free, it must be excellent news to receive! A good story for the contest, but one suggestion is making adding paragraphs in your story, would make to a bit easier to read.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
    Great suggestion and competed, I am grateful...
Comment from Heather Knight
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I'm so happy to read your wife is okay. I can relate to this as my daughter had leukemia when she was four. Now she's 24 and living life to the full.
Thanks so much for sharing your story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much and I delight to learn that your daughter thrives so precious are our loved ones..
Comment from rockmann
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Written from the heart, this is very powerful. I am so happy your wife is cancer free, and you two can get on with enjoying life. I did a lot of questioning when my wife suffered a traumatic brain injury, as well as a lot of cursing and crying, so your story really hit home.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much for your comments and sharing. I am sorry to read about your wife?s tragic event. Somehow we just power on and through don?t we?
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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I'm sorry to hear of this terrible news. I will pray for you and your wife. God can heal even seemingly impossible cases. I hope yours if one on them.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    You Sir, are the kindest of commentators and the Joy is God?s Grace continued giving us more time....
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Wow! What an amazing story and contest entry, JLR. You told it well with deep feeling and emotion, coupled with the medical technology and info regarding the procedure. I will pray for her and you. Best wishes in this contest and in overcoming this personal battle. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    My soul soars! Thank you for your comments and good wishes.
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 22-Jul-2019
    Be strong. There's power in prayer!
Comment from Brenda Henderson
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Wow! What a testimony! So glad to hear your soul mate is now 2 years cancer free! I know what it is to stand with and by a loved one who is fighting cancer. My Mother is a two time cancer survivor! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    Thank you from the bottom on my heart and continue good wished for your mom.
reply by Brenda Henderson on 22-Jul-2019
    You're welcome! Thank You!
Comment from kahpot
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What a wonderful read although sad but I love a happy outcome, your writing and description of the turmoil, anxiety, and complete slowdown of your lives was extremely well written, along with the difference it has made right up till the now, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    My greatest change is my daily approach ?today? and being glad about that! Thank you
Comment from Alyssa Rose
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Congratulations to your wife for beating cancer. Your title is clever; I immediately knew, once cancer was mentioned, that it was breast. I enjoyed the pace and of your story and style of writing. It was frantic, then slowed; it made me feel in the story.

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    I am very grateful for your review and comments.