Achievement:Intensity of CAN!
Yea, I CAN, such say-er succeeds...53 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a very good message to get out there. I love the picture that goes with it. The image is powerful and leads you into the words that show the positive nature of the writer.
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This is a very good message to get out there. I love the picture that goes with it. The image is powerful and leads you into the words that show the positive nature of the writer.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Mia Twysted,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and ENCOURAGING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like the line, "Whatever we see around us/is the upshot of fantastic CAN/helping us search the universe" in stanza 3. I see some internal rhyme in "spheres" and "sheer" and "super might" and "insight." This resounds with optimism. The poet's voice is enthusiastic. I wondered at the use of "Yea" instead of "Yeah" but assumed you wanted a Biblical sort of language style.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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I like the line, "Whatever we see around us/is the upshot of fantastic CAN/helping us search the universe" in stanza 3. I see some internal rhyme in "spheres" and "sheer" and "super might" and "insight." This resounds with optimism. The poet's voice is enthusiastic. I wondered at the use of "Yea" instead of "Yeah" but assumed you wanted a Biblical sort of language style.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello CrystieCookie999,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY and ENCOURAGING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Winslow
Dear RP:,
For to succeed one must never say I can't because as you say he/she leaves here with no traces. The power of trying is required. Good rhyming.
Cheers,
Winslow
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Dear RP:,
For to succeed one must never say I can't because as you say he/she leaves here with no traces. The power of trying is required. Good rhyming.
Cheers,
Winslow
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Winslow,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and ENCOURAGING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Bichon
A great inspiring entry to the I can contest. Your points are very well made and come across with hopefulness. Best of luck in the contest with your entry!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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A great inspiring entry to the I can contest. Your points are very well made and come across with hopefulness. Best of luck in the contest with your entry!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Bichon,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from dragonpoet
There is a lot of power in positive thinking. But sometimes we need to realize we others to get done what we dream of.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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There is a lot of power in positive thinking. But sometimes we need to realize we others to get done what we dream of.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Dragonpoet,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are most kindly welcome, RP.
Joan
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
An interesting poem, fulled with CAN do instead of CAN'T DO. A clever image that works very while with the poem. I also liked the spirit of God throughout the work. Thank you for sharing your work. Blessings. ~Brenda
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An interesting poem, fulled with CAN do instead of CAN'T DO. A clever image that works very while with the poem. I also liked the spirit of God throughout the work. Thank you for sharing your work. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Brenda,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from sunnilicious
Good artwork choice and overall presentation. Optimistic outlooks can save us. Belief in God and ourselves would definitely be a great start too. I like your repeat of the word "CAN". Good rhythm and rhymes. Motivational poem. Nice work :)
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Good artwork choice and overall presentation. Optimistic outlooks can save us. Belief in God and ourselves would definitely be a great start too. I like your repeat of the word "CAN". Good rhythm and rhymes. Motivational poem. Nice work :)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Sunnilicious,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from karenina
My older brother's favorite words to live by is "If you can dream it you can do it."--your poem reminded me of this power of positivity. You could not possibly be more on theme for this "I Can" contest!--Good luck!--Karenina
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My older brother's favorite words to live by is "If you can dream it you can do it."--your poem reminded me of this power of positivity. You could not possibly be more on theme for this "I Can" contest!--Good luck!--Karenina
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Karenina,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Come on! Win this one! (smile!)---Karenina
Comment from Heather Knight
You are so right. A positive attitude is necessary to achieve our goals.
This is a very intelligent, thought-provoking poem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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You are so right. A positive attitude is necessary to achieve our goals.
This is a very intelligent, thought-provoking poem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Maria Jose Garcia,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from nomi338
Truly, I can do all things with the faith and backing of my God who controls all things. When Jesus spoke of the power of faith the size of a mustard seed, one of the tiniest seeds in existence. He affirmed the power of believing in not only oneself, but also the power of faith and belief in our creator.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Truly, I can do all things with the faith and backing of my God who controls all things. When Jesus spoke of the power of faith the size of a mustard seed, one of the tiniest seeds in existence. He affirmed the power of believing in not only oneself, but also the power of faith and belief in our creator.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Nomi338,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Jesus's thoughts.
With best wishes,
~ RP
