The Promise
God's gift of the partaking of the chalice48 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
This spiritual, beautifully well counted syllables and penned ethereal poem is an invocation and evocation of Christ's promise to man before his Calvary in the Olive Garden. I love the whole delicate and gentle descending of the versification throughout its spiritual demanding. Very well Indeed and may God bless you!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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This spiritual, beautifully well counted syllables and penned ethereal poem is an invocation and evocation of Christ's promise to man before his Calvary in the Olive Garden. I love the whole delicate and gentle descending of the versification throughout its spiritual demanding. Very well Indeed and may God bless you!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Hitcher
The legendary Grail. fought over, sought for centuries and apparantley residing in a church in León in northern Spain... apparently.
A nice spiritual etheree for the contest friend, good Luck!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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The legendary Grail. fought over, sought for centuries and apparantley residing in a church in León in northern Spain... apparently.
A nice spiritual etheree for the contest friend, good Luck!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Hitcher, so many probabilities have been written about the Grails secret resting place. Books will continue to unfold for eons.
Comment from sunnilicious
Nice work.
I found it to be a spiritual poem that was religious based. It encourages others to take a moment for themselves and for God. Well thought out. Clearly written. Great storytelling. Excellent :)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Nice work.
I found it to be a spiritual poem that was religious based. It encourages others to take a moment for themselves and for God. Well thought out. Clearly written. Great storytelling. Excellent :)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You express mankind's greatest hope. A return to a time when things weren't on the verge of exploding. I wonder if such a time ever existed. There have been wars for as long as people have lived.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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You express mankind's greatest hope. A return to a time when things weren't on the verge of exploding. I wonder if such a time ever existed. There have been wars for as long as people have lived.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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True and sad at the same time.
Comment from Mastery
Excellent choice of words for this etheree, author. I also think your choice of artwork for your poem is a wonderful one. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. It deserves to win for sure. :) Bob
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Excellent choice of words for this etheree, author. I also think your choice of artwork for your poem is a wonderful one. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. It deserves to win for sure. :) Bob
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Bob, thanks I had a grat time with this one, JLR
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You mean a great time. :) Bob
Comment from marinaluv
A beautiful contest entry worthy of praise. Thank you for sharing and posting on this platform, I hope you continue to thrive and craft these beautifully written pieces.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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A beautiful contest entry worthy of praise. Thank you for sharing and posting on this platform, I hope you continue to thrive and craft these beautifully written pieces.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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I am grateful for your review and comments.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were clear, straight forward, strong, spiritual and
creative. I really enjoy the theme of this poem and it is all that I would hope for. I pondered on the words. The artwork is perfect and goes well with the theme and words of this poem. Thank you for defining the word Grail.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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The author's words were clear, straight forward, strong, spiritual and
creative. I really enjoy the theme of this poem and it is all that I would hope for. I pondered on the words. The artwork is perfect and goes well with the theme and words of this poem. Thank you for defining the word Grail.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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You are welcome andthanks for the review!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I like this entry for the Etheree Poem contest.
Your promise is well spoken and the story clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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I like this entry for the Etheree Poem contest.
Your promise is well spoken and the story clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Sharon, thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Barbaraj1
You did well with this Etheree Poem. You started with one syllable
word and ending with ten syllables. It's a very nice spiritual poem.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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You did well with this Etheree Poem. You started with one syllable
word and ending with ten syllables. It's a very nice spiritual poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Excellent job of meeting the requirements of the contest. Your poem flows well and clever choice of words. It must be hard to write in this style. (mine are all rhyme). Good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Excellent job of meeting the requirements of the contest. Your poem flows well and clever choice of words. It must be hard to write in this style. (mine are all rhyme). Good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Brenda thank you!
