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I See

What I see when I look at you...

49 total reviews 
Comment from Neonewman
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What great piece you have crafted for this particular writing prompt. I especially enjoy this line.
I visually observe tiny wrinkles as your face grins,
God bless
Steve

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
    Steve, thank you for your reflections.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Senses Poetry contest.
You have described the colorfulness of your sight very well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
    Sharon thank you. Sometimes these little challenges are difficult. I found writing about one sense much more of a challenge than I thought it might be.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello mystery writer. This is very nice. You did a great job expressing the appearance of the object of your affection through your eyes. It's a very nice romantic poem. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Robert, thank you for the well wishes.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 04-Nov-2019
    You're welcome
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello anon, this is a really well written free verse using the sense of sight as the theme of this poem. Well written romantic piece and a lovely closing line 'I see a romantic soul, who places a smile on my face.' Well done - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Dorothy, your kind words are encouraging, thank you.
Comment from Gail Denham
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Ah me... not that I ever had such a nice and romantic statement made about my face, my lips, my features - never. We lived in a practical down-to-earth countyr where that kind of "pretty speech" never happene.d
"Wanna' get married?" "Sure, why not"
Nice poem.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Gail, I am certain that your Prince charming is right around the corner. The fact that I'm Irish makes the words flow far easier., LOL
Comment from Sally Law
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Sweet, sensual and filled with longing. It starts with admiration and races quickly to the deeper things of the soul. Whoever this is, I hope she knows she makes you smile.
Sending you my best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Sally, Yes, I am smitten still after 36 years....
Comment from jenintorre
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This poem is so beautiful that it brought tears to my eyes. I think it should do really well in the 'senses' competition. I hope so. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Jen, I am humbled by your wonderful rating and more specifically that my words resonated with you.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This song shows the love of the man through his sense of sight. You use a lot of synonyms in this poem.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Thank you.
reply by dragonpoet on 04-Nov-2019
    Don't mention it.
    dp
Comment from brenda bickers
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This is a very good poem about one of the senses.
What better than to be able to see the face of the one you love.
This is so nicely written, and the presentation is hot.
Well done.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Brenda, thank you.
Comment from Alchera
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This forced monotonous one sense written poem has been well penned throughout its sight/seeing narrative versification. A good job.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Thanks