Reborn
A freestyle poem of my faith.41 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
AMEN! Dear Sis an excellent testimony. Praying you do ok in the contest. No spags and I loved the excellent layout and the picture you chose. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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AMEN! Dear Sis an excellent testimony. Praying you do ok in the contest. No spags and I loved the excellent layout and the picture you chose. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review, generous stars, and kind comments. Most of all, I appreciate our shared faith in such a loving Savior and Lord.
Sending you both my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I just don't know what else to say. I cried, this is so emotional, so true, how can anyone deny what sacrifice was done for us. This brought the raw that people ignore. spread it
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I just don't know what else to say. I cried, this is so emotional, so true, how can anyone deny what sacrifice was done for us. This brought the raw that people ignore. spread it
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the honoring review and generous six star rating. I appreciate it so much, dear one. I'm so glad we share this deep faith and that our Savior is the center of our lives.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ.
Sally xoxoxo
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a poem. I love the story of our redemption but I can't control my pain and anger when I read about the crucifixion. I really can't even look at movies with the crucifixion because it makes me cry and feel physically ill. You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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What a poem. I love the story of our redemption but I can't control my pain and anger when I read about the crucifixion. I really can't even look at movies with the crucifixion because it makes me cry and feel physically ill. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you, dear Shirley. I have found a new friend in you here at the cross. I know it is difficult but Jesus willingly took our sin upon himself and paid for it all. A spotless person and the lamb of God. The Bible said because of that, He is given the name above all names and is glorified in heaven as Lord of all. We have much to look forward to, and He has promised to wipe every tear from our eyes! We will take a walk together you and I and rejoice with Jim, Shirley! Sending you my best today as always, and I hope you know just how much Jesus loves you today and every day.
Your friend, fan, and sister in Christ,
Sally xoxo
Comment from royowen
I have read that excerpt, (or part of it) He suffered untold physical torture to deliver us from the power of death, to take the very sting of death and the power of the grave, and deliver us from final judgement, how could one not love Him. Well done dear Sally, this is beautifully written, and adoringly posted, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I have read that excerpt, (or part of it) He suffered untold physical torture to deliver us from the power of death, to take the very sting of death and the power of the grave, and deliver us from final judgement, how could one not love Him. Well done dear Sally, this is beautifully written, and adoringly posted, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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What a precious friend we have in Jesus! Who else would do such a thing for us, Roy? His love is marvelous and life changing. We share this and Im so glad. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sally xo
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I?m in complete agreement Sally
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful faith poem. It's so hard for me to read the passages about His crucifixion or even to watch that part of films of Jesus. Really well done in expressing the heart of the gospel.
"was torchered," (tortured?)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Beautiful faith poem. It's so hard for me to read the passages about His crucifixion or even to watch that part of films of Jesus. Really well done in expressing the heart of the gospel.
"was torchered," (tortured?)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Yep, I just caught that typo. Oh dear. Thank you, Helen. I'm so glad you liked tnis. I posted a little earlier than planned. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine write for the forthcoming Easter celebration Sally, faithful and fulfilling words from the heart, I wish you luck with the contest, fine words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A fine write for the forthcoming Easter celebration Sally, faithful and fulfilling words from the heart, I wish you luck with the contest, fine words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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It's a,ways Easter and Christmas for me. I love the Lord and all He has done for me. No greater love has no man, than the one who lays his life down for his friends. So true.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from karenina
Your free verse allows for such a personal testament to your faith I enjoyed reading it several times. It is a wonderful time, this period before Easter, to contemplate Jesus' suffering for our sins. God Bless.
(Oh, the spelling is "tortured" in line seven!)
--Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Your free verse allows for such a personal testament to your faith I enjoyed reading it several times. It is a wonderful time, this period before Easter, to contemplate Jesus' suffering for our sins. God Bless.
(Oh, the spelling is "tortured" in line seven!)
--Karenina
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and generous stars. I'll give them to Jesus for His crown of glory. He is the real star of this poem. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sally xoxoxo
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Agreed!--Karenina
Comment from Mastery
Wonderful writing Sal. It is especially inspiring to one who has been ill so much recently (me) I am sorry i have missed so many of your posts my friend Bless you :) Bob
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Wonderful writing Sal. It is especially inspiring to one who has been ill so much recently (me) I am sorry i have missed so many of your posts my friend Bless you :) Bob
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Bob. I'm so pleased this poem inspired and uplifted you. I'm so sorry to hear you're sick, and send this thank you along with prayers for your speedy recovery. I was blessed to see you name and wonderful review. Thank you, again.
All my best,
Sal xo
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Sincere thanks and bless you and family too Sal. :) Bob
Comment from estory
What I liked about this was that you put us there at the foot of the cross, watching the sufferings of Jesus, and you told the poem in a very personal voice fraught with emotion. We really get a great sense of the guilt we feel at being the cause of this suffering, but also the relief in being freed from sin by it. We can leave the cross, and death, and start a new life from there. Lots of detail in the descriptions, lots of vivid detail, really wrench up our experience of this poem. estory
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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What I liked about this was that you put us there at the foot of the cross, watching the sufferings of Jesus, and you told the poem in a very personal voice fraught with emotion. We really get a great sense of the guilt we feel at being the cause of this suffering, but also the relief in being freed from sin by it. We can leave the cross, and death, and start a new life from there. Lots of detail in the descriptions, lots of vivid detail, really wrench up our experience of this poem. estory
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the double treat of seeing you today. I am honored. I'm glad you were inspired by my poem and thought it personal. It was and still is. Sending you my best today as,
Sally xoxo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I loved the line about our desperation being His concern. You did a great job with this and I can think many of us can relate to your words. Great job friend.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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I loved the line about our desperation being His concern. You did a great job with this and I can think many of us can relate to your words. Great job friend.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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I just want you to know there was a few people I thought of when I wrote tjis. One was out, sweet Megan. I hope you know that Jesus loves you and you are Jis concern. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
