A Window On My World
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Existence Is Tame"Daily 5-7-5 simplicities for April Na-Po-Wri-Mo
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words clearly paint a picture of one who loves and lives for the outdoors. Readers can feel the longing to commune with nature rather than look at 4 static wall due to the lockdown. Your iart is a great accompaniment to your well-chosen words. I like the color scheme, too. Good job with the correct syllable count per line throughout. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Your words clearly paint a picture of one who loves and lives for the outdoors. Readers can feel the longing to commune with nature rather than look at 4 static wall due to the lockdown. Your iart is a great accompaniment to your well-chosen words. I like the color scheme, too. Good job with the correct syllable count per line throughout. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your excellent review. It is very thorough, and encouraging.
