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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem contains a stanza I like a lot:
Calm with good advice:
optimistic confidence
we're not all at sea
A reminder that we may be sick of limitations, but at least we are not seasick nor lost nor (hopefully) anywhere near the virus. Nice share.
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This poem contains a stanza I like a lot:
Calm with good advice:
optimistic confidence
we're not all at sea
A reminder that we may be sick of limitations, but at least we are not seasick nor lost nor (hopefully) anywhere near the virus. Nice share.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
I enjoyed your poem! This crisis has affected all people of every country so I agree as the slogan here has been "We're all in this together!" I think for those of us who write, gave us an outlet during this time~
Love ya!'
Parry
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I enjoyed your poem! This crisis has affected all people of every country so I agree as the slogan here has been "We're all in this together!" I think for those of us who write, gave us an outlet during this time~
Love ya!'
Parry
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your 575 suite reads well, LisaMay. Each 575 could be a stand alone. But when read together, your poem is powerful. Everyone in all countries has been affected in some way--some more than others. You are right about being in this together. Also, we must all be wary of what will happen after some normalcy returns. I saw that NZ had eased the social distancing and was wondering what those results were like. It will be interesting to see how long it lasts and if it continues to ease. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your 575 suite reads well, LisaMay. Each 575 could be a stand alone. But when read together, your poem is powerful. Everyone in all countries has been affected in some way--some more than others. You are right about being in this together. Also, we must all be wary of what will happen after some normalcy returns. I saw that NZ had eased the social distancing and was wondering what those results were like. It will be interesting to see how long it lasts and if it continues to ease. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise advice here Lisa, at least we all understand the dangers and what we are faced with and hopefully we will avoid the spread, but as you say our lives have changed forever, poignant words here, love Dolly x
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Wise advice here Lisa, at least we all understand the dangers and what we are faced with and hopefully we will avoid the spread, but as you say our lives have changed forever, poignant words here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
