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Wedding Chronicles

Episode One

26 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is soooo cute. I loved reading this and the ending is perfect. You did a great job with this story. I can'i imagine he'll ever play a practical joke again, and he should not. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Ah, thank you so much for the great review and kind comments. I'm delighted you enjoyed the humor. A nice break for me as I finish Double Blind in September/October. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally XOs........
Comment from Tina Crute
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Sally, this is so cute, and full of action. It is well-writtem and glides through my mind easily. Unlike some stories, I never had to stop and think..."Who is talking here?" With unmarked conversation in your story, I knew who was doing the talking at all times. Hope that makes sense. It bugs me when I have to figure it out,lol. Lawrence sure had it coming, and he got it! I enjoyed reading this funny and sweet story. Was this inspired by some of YOUR real events?

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
    Yes, I was a bridesmaid in this wedding and my husband was o e of the groomsmen. Most of this is true with a few of my own embellishments. It mad to be a little fictional. I so appreciate the wonderful review and kimd comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. All in good fun. Sending you my best today as always Sally XOs.....
reply by Tina Crute on 06-Sep-2020
    That's cool that you used a memory to write a story. I've been thinking about you and was going to check on you today.Are you doing okay? I wish you the best. You've been so kind to me. I want to be there for you if theres any way I can do that.
    Your friend,
    Tina
Comment from BethShelby
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This is funny but I'm sure it wasn't at the time. It is a great story to tell the grandkids. I assume you are Belle. Maybe the groom deserved this but it was a bit cruel for the bride. You say episode one. It there more?

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
    Yes, there will be more of these for different couples. No, I'm not Belle. I will be in a future episode though. Probably the last one.

    Anyway, the real Belle was a good sport and the therapy cured the groom of his prankish ways. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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I enjoyed this wedding chronicle, a dramatic presentation of the taletelling; fostered by dialogues realistic and contributory; it has a good beginning and descriptive ending; well said; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
    Thanks so much for the wonderful review and kind comments. It is greatly appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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What a wonderful story! This is a true marriage if I ever heard of one! ha ha Your ability to write this in a humorous way adds an extra dimension. Wonderfully done!

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
    Dear Rebecca, thank you for the wonderful review and kindest compliments. The stars are greatly appreciated, too. Sending you my best as always,
    Sally XOs.....
Comment from damommy
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That was quite a wedding day. Too bad the payback had to include the bride's day, too. I wonder if Lawrence learned his lesson. Great story to pass down through the generations.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
    He did learn his lesson because I was there. We laugh our heads off thinking about this day now that everyone is grown up. Thanks so much!!
    Sending you my best today,
    Sal XOs...