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Beautiful

A 3-6-9 Poem

42 total reviews 
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Sally, you are so right, true beauty is tied up in a person being who they are. I love the artwork you included with the poem. It fits perfectly.

Thank you for sharing,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Rhonda. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally XOs......
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Sally, this is a very well written 3/6/9. Clever use of metaphor in line two. The picture compliments your writing. Nice quote from Emily Dickinson. Yet more good work from you Sal - Love Dorothy xxx

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for the beautiful review, my dear Dorothy. It was so appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs.....XOs.....
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Beauty is spilling out - what an image:) and then at the end you are left with your authentic self. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Iza. It is so appreciated. Sending along my best to you and yours, Sally XOs.....
Comment from sammielwf
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Sally,
As I read your elegant but simple words...it got me thinking/picturing in my minds eye what I thought beauty to be.
So many examples about billboard beauty are all around us....so many lip synched versions of beauty are found in the ads on television, face book etc . Where is the "come from the heart"...inner beauty that our parents spoke to us about?...."You are beautiful" they told us as children (and they were right- because we were their creation/child and they loved everything about us)
"You are beautiful", Spirit whispers to us and Spirit is correct because we are made of Spirit and Spirit created us.
"You are beautiful" our spouse/partner whispers in our ear, and they are correct because the love that is created between us...is beautiful..
And yes....
Self love...authentic inner beauty....with strands of all those afore mentioned.....spill out and touch all within your orbit.
I loved this piece Sally....and it sparked all kinds of things for my imagination to create and ponder.
Love to you today dear Authentic Sally.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the beautiful review and kindest compliments, dear Sammie. I'm delighted you saw the depth of this poem. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs....
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 3-6-9 poem about the real and true beauty spills out from within when we are not really think about putting our best foot forth.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the wonderful review and generous compliments, dear Sandra. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always
    Sal XOs......
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Sally.
-I like the quote, too.
-A good topic with
good description.
-I like the opening lines
about beauty, and the
positive message about
being your "authentic self."
-Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you, dear Pam. I'm motivated to write about beauty and virtue these days. There's simply too much ugly grasping for attention. If anything, this gave me so,e relief. Sending you my best today as always and blessings of beauty for your day.
    Sal XOs.....
reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Oct-2020
    You are very welcome, Sally, you are much better off looking on the brighter side, even if it is a little harder to do:)
Comment from Ben B.
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Thank you for sharing this. Messages of inner beauty are not uncommon, but they are often ignored. It is always wrong to pretend to be what we are not. Thank you for the reminder to us.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Good afternoon, Ben. Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful compliments. Both are greatly appreciated. Sending you my best for a beautiful day,
    Sal XOs....
Comment from wishawave
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This is a beautifully written poem, like it is written in the poem "Beauty is the real you spilling out" I like the verb choice of the author, and I also enjoy the whole arrangement of this poem including the photo to go with it.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. It's so appreciated.

    Sending you my very best today and blessings for your day,
    Sally XOs.....
Comment from Teri7
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Sally, This is a very good 3-6-9 poem you have penned using the word beautiful. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I love that song and the artist. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much, my beautiful friend. I enjoyed writing this and thinking of you at the same time. You're so beautiful to me, full of the Holy Spirit.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally XOs....XOs.....
reply by Teri7 on 29-Oct-2020
    Aww! Thank you so much my dear friend. I try to get as close as I can to Him. love you my friend! Teri
Comment from pome lover
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the whole thing: your poem, the music and the accompanying picture, just perfect, and indeed beautiful! Congratulations on a wonderful presentation! Very professional and much enjoyed!
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for this beautiful review, from a beautiful smile. I so enjoyed this! You really made my day... thank you! So good to see you! I hope you're well and good, and that you have had a good year in spite of everything going on. It's been trying on every level. I just decided when I was writing this we need to focus on some good things especially inward beauty, which seems to be such a rare thing these days. I think I'm really tired of ugly. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your week.
    Sal XOs........
reply by pome lover on 29-Oct-2020
    well, Sally, you certainly made my day with that lovely note! You're right about thinking of good things. I just hope we will be able to continue to.
    I'm fine and hope you are, too.
    I love your picture. such a happy, beautiful couple!
    I think everybody is on pins and needles about this election. Am trying not to get so angry, but it's hard. I just have to turn the blasted TV off and take a break from the news.
    Thanks for thinking of me. You take care, too, and stay well.
    Katharine