Reviews from

The Fighter

The perks of winning

31 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

It's a bit brutal, (the rules) not that I've ever entered a flash fiction Contest. I take it getting flattened relieved you from the ignominy of future failure. A lot of our footballers suffer later from frequent concussion in their playing days, they're more careful how they treat them long term, our footballers don't wear armour like grid iron players. Beautifully written Jay, good luck, blessings Roy

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
    Thank you, Roy. Your footballers are the heroes. I can't imagine the blows that some of them take without protection.
reply by royowen on 15-Nov-2020
    They are brave